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Reviewer: Miracle_child Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2014 - 08:51 am Title: One for sorrow, two for joy.

“Just made it so a second for us is an hour for everyone else"

I think you wanted to say the opposite, right?

E.g.: "Made it so we could talk for an hour while the rest of the world only has one second ticking by."

 

You had a cute idea for this story but you seem to be falling in the typical Mary Sue/ Gary Sue trap. You try to have one character (Spike) who is just too amazing and powerful. About the only reason not to hate your version of Spike is to remember cannon!Spike and why we love him. Sorry to be so harsh. But right in this chapter: First he sets Buffy to do this huge thing of talking to her mother and then he goes, behind her back, solving it for her and just to present her with what he's done he has to manipulate time because he couldn't just have told Joyce he needed a few minutes with Buffy alone. *rolleyes* You've got to be kidding me. 

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2010 - 02:11 pm Title: One for sorrow, two for joy.

Too bad Buffy didn't figure out that Angel would turn into Angelus because of her. She could have avoided some hurt.
More training means seeing Spike more often - I fear it is because something is coming.

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2010 - 06:39 am Title: One for sorrow, two for joy.

Is it time for Spuffy smut yet? This is a great story and thank you so much for updating twice today. I'm off to read Chapter 10.

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