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Reviewer: Kirsty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/13/2010 - 09:25 am Title: The Big Reveal.

I wrote a long review but then it all disappeared :( So Now I'll just keep it simple..

What bothered me in this is Kendra running off all the time. First she runs (and Joyce follows) and cries because Xander and Willow aren't the friends she thouht they were, and then almost immediatly she runs off and cries (and Joyce follows) because Xander tried to use her. It seems like too much of change too soon. And the leving the room is quite annoying, couldn't she do it just once and tell all..

But it's still good and interesting. I'll review better later when I have the time again.

Author's Response: You think you have your first friend, and then you get another and see how a friendship really should be like. And bang, you see the differences. Anyway, that's how I see it. :-) Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: LexieAnnMalfoy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 04:34 am Title: The Big Reveal.

Great chapter, I do have some question thought. Where The Master ans The Anointed One, the other Buffy didn't get a chance to kill the Master and Spike didn't kill the Anointed One so where are they? Also will Buffy bring up Dawn at all to Joyce or at least talk about her? Okay there my questions great chapter.

Author's Response: The Master is still stuck underground and I figure that the rumor of the Light would have scared of the help he else would have around. No mention of Dawn in this one. Sorry but thanks for the read.

Reviewer: Naurolim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2010 - 03:40 am Title: The Big Reveal.

I loved this story when you first published it and was really annoyed that I didn't save it at the time. I'm so glad you are posting frequently, thank you very much.
To be honest though, I really didn't see a problem with the English readability snd spelling. You have written a great story though, and that is what I loved the first time round.

Thanks again for the quick updates and can't wait to reread the rest

Author's Response: Thank you for taking to comment.

Author's Response: should be:Thank you for taking time to comment.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 - 07:05 pm Title: The Big Reveal.

That's a nice twist with the Changelings and a good explanation for Xander's behavior. The Scoobie meeting could have gone better but it could have gone worse too. The truth is out and Buffy should be left alone. (Should...)
Enjoyed the new chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking time to comment.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2010 - 06:10 pm Title: The Big Reveal.

Sounds like the Scoobies had a much needed reality check. They are truly passive agressive with their behavior. Angel sounds like he has got a "Hero" complex and all must bow to him for being in their company. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading.

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