this is totally different from what i read of Spuffy stories so far and i'm very interested in this one :)
he growled? ohmygosh.. is he going to be something more feral than a fawn??
please update soon *batts eyelashes*

Author's Response: I am trying to make it much more like a fairy tale because I feel like the characters could do just as well in that kind of setting. I'm really glad you are enjoying it though! As far as being feral, while William keeps pieces of his human persona by day, he keeps some of his animal persona by night. More should show up later ;) Thank you for reviewing! Hopefully I will post later today or tomorrow.

Lovely update :D I don't really care for Queen Dru, but rarely do I like Dru's character in any story. She seems a mite too possessive, no? ;) Anyway, still looking forward to how it all will unfold.

"...leaves whispered as they grazed the ground. Innerving as it was, Buffy kept her fears at bay and continued into the depths. ..."

and right there, don't you mean Unnerving? :D (nitpick, thy name is Annie)


Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you are enjoying it (sans Dru). I normally wouldn't make Dru so possessive, but I'm basing the story loosely on the album Hazards of Love, and in it she is scarily possessive; it's the only way the rest of the story works. Besides, Dru is a bit crazy... haha. Thank you for the nitpicking, I fixed it :) I hope you continue to read and enjoy this and thank you for the review!