Date: 05/31/2011 - 03:53 am Title: Chapter Six
Yes, you're poetry is bad, but that's only looking at it from today's standards. Back then, rhymey whimey describey wibey poetry was totes in!
Great job with the story. Your writing is excellent and interesting and basically just very, very, VERY well done.
Date: 12/19/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Six
Love the letter exchange. An innocent way to get to know the other better.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/16/2010 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Six
Very sweet chapter. Looking forward to the New Year. Have a wonderful holiday (whichever you celebrate)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 12/15/2010 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Six
loving this story so far. thanks for the french translation, i got the gist, but im glad i know what he said :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 12/15/2010 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter Six
Loved this chapter! It was so just sweet. William definitely doesn't see himself as a romantic hero but he is definitely falling into the role quite nicely. I especially like how they are writing letters to each other back and forth. Sad we have lost the art of the written letter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! :)
Date: 12/15/2010 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great story, and by the way, Samuel Johnson said, "When a man is tired of London, he is tired of life."
Author's Response: Thank you!