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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/13/2014 - 09:44 am Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

Cute start. Well written. I like the literary stuff, and especially like your poetic imagery (this time with Buffy being made of fragile stuff that would shatter with the close of the door). And I kinda like the disjointed, unsettling feel of the narrative so far; feels like it reflects their own uncertainty.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2012 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

lol, loved your author's note you silly silly girl. i love buffy calling it her lady location. that was wicked funny. now that we know where spike stands with dru, i'm curious to know why buffy is doing this aside from obvious lust you know? great job hun

Author's Response: Lady location might be something I've said in conversation. You'll find out!

Reviewer: badbetsy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 08:33 am Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

This is amazingly hot! I love your writing style and the detailed descriptions of their interactions. So looking forward to reading the rest.

And oh dear, I shall never look at a crumb the same way again ;)

Author's Response: Hot, really? Thank you! I'm glad you like my writing style, it's a pleasure to be able to write for you. I had to share that thing with the crumb, because ever since undergrad, it's haunted me. Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Spuffy0145 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 03:26 am Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

I love this story :)


Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing it. Hopefully the story will continue to love you back.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2010 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

Pretentious literary references rule.

Author's Response: Glad you like them, as I stated before I'm still on a payment plan for them. Plus as a reader, you get the added bonus of enjoying some actual decent writing mixed in with filthy, filthy sex scenes.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2- Feasting on the Crumb

Loved this chapter. It was realistic, with the awkwardness of two people who are unsure about what this is, but enjoying it all the same. It makes Buffy look more like a woman who's searching for something she isn't finding at home, and not a seductress. Enjoyed. on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the awkwardness. Both of the characters are really vulnerable. Given what we find out about Buffy's relationship with Riley, if she were more predatory she'd be totally unlikable. Glad you're not automatically turned off to her.

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