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Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2012 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

well that certainly answered my question didn't it lol. wow that's tough. what do you do in that situation when you have your spouse, but you don't really because your relationship has completely changed? I dunno. It's all very confusing. still great chapter. you really captured buffy's emotions and confusion well :)

Author's Response: I've wanted to write a story like this for a long time--a sympathetic affair. She's driven to this because her poor spouse has completely shut down sexually and emotionally. Thank you for sticking with the sad.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2010 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

I love Dan Savage. He gives good advice. He lives down the street from me, actually. And open relationships are very common here in Seattle...not my thing, but to each their own.

I'm really enjoying this story so far. You're a great writer. Have you thought about creating an LJ? You could get your stories out to more of the fandom that way.

Author's Response: My brother-in-law lives in Seattle! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I'm super-flattered that you like my writing. I haven't really thought about Live Journal, I'm kind of new to all this. Thanks for the advice.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

Great story. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

Interesting spin on this story. This chapter shows that Buffy is looking for a connection that her husband isn't giving her--not sex, but being together. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and sticking with it! I should have more up in a few days.

Reviewer: total geek Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

I really like this fic! more please!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2010 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

this is seeming to be quite an interesting read, I hope you do explore the riley/buffy thing more and can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: I am going to go into Riley and Buffy a bit more, but it's primarily a Spike/Buffy story. Hoping to make him much more sympathetic than he was on the series. I don't know why I could never really warm up to him on the show, but I couldn't.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2010 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 3-Many Pies

How old was Buffy when she had Dawn? And as per usual I love it.

Author's Response: She was 17--I go into that in the next chapter.Thanks for the comment!

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