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Reviewer: Puddinhead Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

ok. Buttery moan. Bare as winter trees. i am starting to get a major crush on this story. This is very, very good stuff minx. i love him in this story. I'm starting to love her characterization too. and mostly I'm starting to love your way with words (almost as much as I hate my shift key)



Author's Response: I tried to really write the hell out of this one. I was inspired by "The Wasteland" and tried to really focus on imagery in this one. "Name," was more about plot, "Secret," was about writing comedy and this one was about character dissection and imagery. Thanks so much for the beautiful compliment. I have sympathy hate for your shift key.

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2010 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

I understand her need for sex, she is young and had a lifetime to fulfill that need until her husband was injured. I feel both are cheating themselves by not out in the open with their love. Her husband might hurt for a bit although it would be one less item in his life to deal with.
The time is coming when it will be revealed to everyone and they will have no supporters for their love.

Wonderful insightful story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2010 - 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

More please!

Author's Response: As you wish.

Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2010 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

Loving the story more and more...

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Behind Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

*squeal* That comment was made on another story. It was so great you were able to use it here! It made me smile ;) This chapter was great! I could totally picture a naked Spike trying to wrangle Sunshine into the crate! That part made me giggle. HEHE! On a sadder note, Buffy realizing she loved him, but at the same time pushed his away. Great chapter, looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I couldn't work that image into the story associated with your original comment, but I loved it just the same. Glad you found the nude dog wrangling funny, I can never tell if stuff that makes me laugh is working. Thank you for sticking with this piece!

Reviewer: a Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

Not normally my cuppa, infidelity fic, but you've made them so compelling and real. I feel for them, even while feeling sorry for Riley, and especially Dawn.

Author's Response: Glad you could relate to them. The infidelity is less about naughtiness and more about missed chances, if that makes sense. Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2010 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 7-Slow Bleed

Wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this story and your telling of it. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, that means the world to me.

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