I am loving this story! Great chapter. So sexy, sweet, and heartbreaking all in one. Not sure how they're going to resolve their issues but I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for the comment.

GAH! This story is so incredibly hot and so devestatingly sad at the same time. It makes my morning bus commute to work a bit more bearable.

I love how you've quoted The Cure. TS Eliot. My favorite band an poet. Its like this story was made for me, really.

I guess it's only a matter of time before they get caught...

Author's Response: That is amazing praise! Thank you. I've always wanted to write something that makes somebody else say "this story was made for me." I think that's why everybody picks up a pen or starts clacking away at a keyboard. Thank you.