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Reviewer: Becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2011 - 12:59 am Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

A bittersweet goodbye. Looks like this story might end well yet. Strangely, I was hoping for a tragic ending. Fluffy!Spuffy was never my thing.

I can't wait to see how it all ends.

Author's Response: I honestly haven't decided yet how it's going to end. Hope your new year's was fun!

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2010 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

Thank you for another meaningful chapter. You're really filling out their characters and I think a lot of people can relate. Riley punching him in the nose - not cool, though Spike didn't insult him about the chair which was also good. I am glad she finally did figure out that Riley was gone a lot more than being home, and she really was still a single Mom just with a wedding ring. I am sorry they didn't have enough time in a warm, dry attic filled with memories to have sex. I will be on the lookout for the next chapter/

Author's Response: When you put it like that, so am I. Thank you for the comment and for sticking with story.

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

Thanks for the update. Riley may have gotten his punch in but glad that Spike got the last word. Hope things keep going good for Spike and Buffy and that they get better for her and her daughter. Maybe the baby will bring everyone closer.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could tell you, but I think you'll like it better if I don't.

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

Read it all at once. Magnifico. Great dialogue, inner dialogue and chemistry between him and her. Spot on.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment and for reading the story. I have written some other stuff, and would love your feedback on those, too.

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

When Riley gave him the “If you ever hurt her, I’ll hurt you,” line, I wish Spike had retorted "I doubt I could ever top you kicking her out of her childhood home and turning her daughter against her!"

Author's Response: In Riley's defense, he didn't really turn Dawn against Buffy, though he did kick her out of her childhood home. Thank you for the comment and for sticking with the story!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2010 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 15-Leaving

Loved this chapter. Enjoyed the interaction between Buffy and Spike in the attic, Riley's and Buffy's, and especially Riley's and Spike's. Chuckled at Spike's retort after Riley punched him--brilliant! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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