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Reviewer: Nana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 19-The Stairwell

The last two chapters have been incredible. I understand the lost of the baby and all the feelings surrounding it. He also still needs comfort from her, like he has given her. You finally got Dawn head out of the sand. Thanks. I know that is just a breather she be back to her rotten self soon. Actually they are solid chapters. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't think Dawn's rotten, though, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 19-The Stairwell

Yay update! Wasn't expecting the 2nd one. Another sad but sweet chapter. Good to see that Dawn is still good people even if she had a angsty teenage hormonal breakdown. In relation to Dawn, I guess sometimes we're so caught up in the moment we don't see the world outside. Seems like that book showed her a little more of the world.

Author's Response: Thanks for the insight! I think Dawn forgot her mom was more than her mom, she was a flawed, vulnerable person, too.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Stairwell

I'm glad despite the saddness of the situation, Buffy and Dawn were able to put the past behind them and move on. Dawn was very mature about the whole thing. Brava for her!

Author's Response: I'm glad they were able to work it out. Thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2011 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 19-The Stairwell

I was waited for you to complete this story before I read it but I couldn't wait. This story is fantastic. I really like how you write Buffy and Spike's relationship. I also like them individually. Your writing is very moving and I can't wait to read how it turns out. I am glad that they are still together and appreciate Dawn's realization that Spike needs Buffy more. I love this story..

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad this story was moving, I really enjoyed writing it. There's only one chapter left, a bit lighter for the very end.

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