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Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 19

It's great that things between Buffy and Xander are better. Now I'm nervous about how Will is going to respond to Buffy's kiss. Hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out!! Next update will be tomorrow. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 19

Oh. My. God.
That was brilliant! Lovedlovedloved the ending of this chapter! The best cliffie ever!! And...no no no no! What am I saying?? Don't stop here! C'moooon! She kissed him and he...what??
Ok, frustration of the way, I giggled at “You’re life is like a soap opera,” Willow said, eyes wide. :D
Loved teh fact that Xander apologised to Buffy. He remains angry at Will though, and that is logical somehow to me, since the anger was there mostly pointed at him not Buffy. And, really, was he trying to convince himself or Buffy that he's not gay?..
Any more in the edge of my seat here and I just might fall down ;)
Great chapter! CAN'T wait to read more!

Author's Response: Next chapter will be up tomorrow, I promise. Looking back, I'm actually really pleased with this chapter, so I'm glad you like it as well. And I thank you again for your always enthusiastic reviews!

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter 19

For such a perceptive guy, Spike can be pretty dense sometime. Looking forward for his reaction

Author's Response: All boys are. :) More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 19

Interesting.

Author's Response: In a good way, I hope! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: karen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2011 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 19

i hate you cause now i have to wait till the next chapter to see what happens :(


loved it!!!

Author's Response: I promise the next chapter will be up tomorrow!!! Glad you like! Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 18

Well, it looks like her birthday turned around! It was such a super sweet kiss, simply perfect. Can't wait to see how they both react to it in light of a new sober day!

Author's Response: I couldn't let Buffy have a bad birthday, she had too many on the show! More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter 18

Wow, I bet that kiss shocked the hell out of Will. And I also bet he does not think of her as a kid now.

Author's Response: Definitely shocked! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 18

Yeah, kissage! So small a move, and yet I know he's totally floored. Xander's gonna hate him more, but as long as Spuffy's preserved, all is good in the world. Awesome. Update soon.

Author's Response: Will definitely wasn't expecting it! More to come very soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mmda15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 18

Omg!!! When i first started reading this story i wasnt sure i would like it. But you have got me hooked!!! Can't wait to see what happens next! I love it :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying! More to come soon! Thankd for reviewing!

Reviewer: a Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, brave Buffy!

Here's hoping Will is feeling happy surprise. *g*

Author's Response: Stay tuned to find out! More to come soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter, can't wait to read how they'll interact the next day. Glad Buffy had a happy birthday!

Author's Response: Couldn't let her have a bad one, she had so many on the show. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter 18

I pretty much stalked the site all day waiting for this :)
Still no answers, but definitely more questions and Spuffy-closeness!! Can't wait for the next fix

Author's Response: I'm so flattered that you've been stalking my story! More to come soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 01:08 am Title: Chapter 18

mmm...I'd like that pink thingy too right now!
Harmony made me worry for a bit, but then she was gone and only brief mention of Riley... Loved it, and that they were dancing. I guess being called just a 'kid' by a guy she likes very, very much, was not good in her books, huh? :)
I'm happy that they didn't argue!
Yay! alcohol relaxed her enough to tell him what she feels about him... I wonder what will she think about that in the morning!
ah...I SO wonder what went through Will's head at her admission...and the sweet little kiss.
Loved it all, and I now crave for more!

Author's Response: I really couldn't let Buffy have a bad birthday, so only a few minor conflicts. More to come soon! Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2011 - 12:58 am Title: Chapter 18

That was a gripping read. I was so immersed in the moment--you set the scene very well. The way you ended it--his reaction--added an entirely new layer to the story. It's like up until that moment he didn't realize he could have romantic feelings for her. I had expected him to be the one to initiate any relationship. It's a great surprise.

Author's Response: He definitely wasn't expecting it either! I'm glad you liked that. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 17

I know Xander was a major jerk but this shows me this is a boy who really hates himself right now. He's very much on the edge to reject such an important friendship. Can't imagine how alone he feels. As for Buffy, at least Will is there to make it all better!

Author's Response: Oh absolutely, his behavior is totally rooted in self-loathing. I'm glad that you interpreted it that way, because that's exactly what I was going for. He's not the bad guy, even though he's been an ass. He has lots of issues to deal with! As for Buffy and Will..;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 11:09 am Title: Chapter 17

This chapter was great. It seems like Hank knows more about the nature of Xander and Will's relationship than he's letting on, automatically assuming Will isn't Buffy's boyfriend. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Well, Hank has met Will before and doesn't really care for him, so he's just trying to stir up trouble. Doesn't necessarily mean he knows...:) More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter 17

ahh.... a pure relief to escape from that horerible thing that was Buffy's birthday dinner :)
Hank is purely rude man, and Xander is becomming angrier at all the world by the minute it seems. He really should speak to someone...
I think that the pink rose Will gave Buffy was sweeeet! :D And her father gave her something of Tiffany's? Huh.. buying her love I guess.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
No, really - CAN'T wait :)

Author's Response: Now onto the good stuff! Xander does need to speak to someone. I have some plans in that area...and yes, Hank is always trying to buy her love. Next chapter will possible be up late late tonight, and if not then definitely tomorrow. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter 17

I hope that was the wake up call Xander needed, making Buffy cry on her B-day. Shame on him,
God Hank is a jack-@$$, ain't he.


Author's Response: Xander will come around eventually...and Hank is definitely a jackass. I hope it wasn't too much, but I actually know people like that. :/ Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JJ Dawson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 06:37 am Title: Chapter 17

I'm loving the story, but I'm wondering when the Spuffy Lovin going to happen? I'm getting anxious here for Spike to tell Buffster he loves her or something...

Author's Response: I have a very strong love for long, drawn out Spuffy stories...;) I hope not too long, but I'm not making any promises, can't rush it! In any case, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 06:20 am Title: Chapter 17

Excellent chapter, can't wait for part two!

Author's Response: Part two coming very soon! Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2011 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter 17

Love him. Such a good reason to have 2 cars at awkward family gatherings. So nice of him to always save her. Honestly, how cold he not be falling. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Writing the end of that chapter made me smile a lot. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 16

Now, If Xander is really gay, that there are a few options as for why is he with Anya - maybe for thnrowing people off his scent and Anya playing along, or maybe he's even trying to be with a girl, or even making Spike jelouse...
Loved the easy way Spike and Buffy are in with each other... and even I have butterflies in my stomach in inticipation for their 'date' on Friday... Is Xhander comming with them to the Bronze too?... maybe showing off Anya to everyone?...
Loved the update!

Author's Response: You're thinking on the right track, I just won't tell you which one is right. :) I am very excited about their date as well! Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hmm... so is Xander actually straight? What's all the tension between he and Will then? And since Will is bisexual, was he the one having feelings for Xander and not vice versa? Soooo many questions!!
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hopefully they will be answered soon!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 - 07:27 am Title: Chapter 16

I think she will have an intersting birthday.
I know why but Xander is being such a jerk.

Author's Response: Definitely interesting! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/02/2011 - 06:21 am Title: Chapter 16

Glad that Buffy and Will have each other. Seems like they are so moving in the right direction. :) Maybe Xander will come around one of these days, too. Update soon!

Author's Response: They definitely are! As for Xander...stay tuned to find out! Thanks for the review!

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