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Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 13

That was a great chapter, beautiful moment between them. You're really seeing the love the characters already have for each other.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed. I really felt there needed to be a special moment between them that wasn't romantic before they can progress. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 13

Some questions answered, now off to see the explanation of Spike's about the phone number of that waiter :D
I liked this chapter very much. Poor Xander :( I wish some people weren't so mean and mind their own business...

Author's Response: Definitely poor Xander! It's interesting because I've had gay friends that are very open about their sexuality, and those who are more like Xander and that's something I want to address. More soon, thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter 13

Yep, that answered some of my questions nicely. Can't wait to see Will's response to Buffy's comment.

Author's Response: Good, I'm glad it did! More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter 13

I love the lighthearted way you put in that cliffhanger. I giggked a littlke seeing that particular scene in my head.

Author's Response: I had the idea, and I was like, YES that's it! Especially since the story has been so serious for the past few chapters.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful cliffhanger for this story. This story is ansgt, and that is such a lighthearted way to leave it. I mean I can just see that scene in my head, and it makes me giggle a little.
That being said, I really hope that is what you were going for with the cliffhanger.
Wow, is Riley even jerkier in this story that the show.

Author's Response: I never like Riley, really for no reason at all, so I can't help but make him a bit of a jerk. But, I hope it's not too much. I don't want him to be unrealistically jerky, just ignorant teenage boy jerky.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/26/2011 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 13

I love the ending. Can't wait to read Spike's reaction. I have a feeling he's going to roll on the floor laughing - literally. But I wouldn't be surprised if he announced he was bi.

Thanks for updating so frequently!

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see...:) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 12

*love* that Buffy finally confronted Xander...they seem like real siblings and I really like how you have conveyed her genuine concern for her brother along with her frustration that he won't talk to her.
Hoping for more soon!! ;)

Author's Response: I have three siblings, so it's fairly easy for me to write sibling confrontations. :) Just posted the next chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter 12

Good chapter. Hopefully Buffy taking a stand and telling Xander she's not going to keep quiet and support his silence anymore will force him to finally open up.

Author's Response: Hopefully...;) You'll find out soon enough. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter 12

:D yay! Maybe some of the comments Buffy made at the end to Xander would make him to snap out of it and talk to at least Spike or Buffy finally :D
great chapter!

Author's Response: Maybe...she'll definitely be getting some answers soon, but not from Xander. ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter 12

Time for Xander to open up.

Thanks for the update. :)

Author's Response: But will he? ;) More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter 12

Well, it keeps on going, and Buffy still doesn't know what's going on. I feel her pain. Update soon!

Author's Response: She'll get answers soon enough. And I know I keep saying that, but this time I mean it. More soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter 12

God, this story just keeps hitting where it hurts. Awkward Dad lunches, so painful. Very truthful and good, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm definitely trying for truthful, and that means not shying away from the most painful things. More soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 12

I just caught up to this story and you have me hooked! I've never read the book but I can't wait to see where you'll take this story. :-)

Author's Response: Glad you like!! The book is great, but I'm definitely departing from it to make it Spuffier. Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 03:33 am Title: Chapter 12

Now my suspensions about Joyce's ealier comments are confirmed. It's Hanks opnions, pfft.

Author's Response: I know, what a jerk! :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2011 - 03:03 am Title: Chapter 12

Ahh, frustrating, just when I thought we'd get some answers. Hopefully Xander will come around and talk to Buffy. Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: I know I've been frustrating you guys with all the non-answers. Now you feel Buffy's pain! There will be some answers soon enough...but not from Xander. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter 11

Well, whatever's going on, they still love Buffy. Update soon.

Author's Response: Of course they do! More soon! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 11

I just found your story - I'm loving it so far. I cannot wait to see where you take this story! I'm particularly enjoying the character development of Buffy as she learns about the world and those closest to her. Can't wait for your next post!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it, as I'm loving writing it! I plan on taking it far...very far. Definitely a learning experience for Buffy. Thanks for finding the story and reviewing! More soon!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 - 02:09 am Title: Chapter 11

Yay, two updates in a day! I loved this chapter, good to know that Buffy can always count on Will and Xan.

Author's Response: I've been on a roll, so I'm just gonna keep posting! And I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! More soon!

Reviewer: MInx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 11

Good chapter, very moving. People are finally saying stuff out loud, a relief.

Author's Response: I'm very pleased you think so! Buffy is finally starting to understand a bit more. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hulettwyo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2011 - 01:30 am Title: Chapter 11

Really loving this story! I hope Will and Xander make up and get to be friends again. Poor confused Buffy. Hopefully someone will clear things up for her soon.

Author's Response: Things will become clearer in time. As for Will and Xander...their are some big issues that need to be addressed. That's all I'll say. :) Thanks for the review! More soon!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

Yup, loved it!
No horror-movie-fest with Xand and Will this New Year, huh? They still won't speak to each other... hopefully all will be well soon :)
And gosh!! some kids are MEAN! :( I will never understand that...
can't wait to read more..
btw, when I'm a bit tipsy like Buffy, I notice such things as scent and all that too :D I'd say the exact same thing ;)

Author's Response: They're both being very stubborn, and they have their reasons...Kids can be very mean. I find teenage boys can be especially cruel, and even worse drunk. It made me sad to write it, but it was something Buffy needed to deal with. I often find myself saying things like that as well, but with more giggling. :) Thanks for the review! More soon!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love your story and how frequently you update it!
Can't wait to know what exactly is going on with Xander and Spike!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like. I've been spending most of my free time writing cause the inspiration just keeps coming. You'll find out soon enough...:D Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ame Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 10

Will spuffiness insue????

Author's Response: Possibly...:) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter! Can't wait for Cordy's New Year party.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked! More soon...

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2011 - 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 10

OOOhh!! Party time! can't wait to see what will be going on there... alcohol loosening up a few tongues...
Joyce is good with dealing, sin't she? She kinda figured it out soon...
can't wait to read some more .:)

Author's Response: Definitely loosening up..:) Yeah, I really love Joyce and I felt that she and Buffy really needed a conversation after the fight. And from what I heard, mother's always know, they just usually deny it. More soon! Thanks for the review!

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