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Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2011 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter 26

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 26

Good chapter! I could see how Spike was hurt. Spike and Xander are both 2 stubborn bulls. Now, Buffy & Spike are playing with fire. Spike has to get his head out of denial land fast!

Author's Response: Lots of things to come! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 26

this was beautifully done! The ending was filled with emotions that fit perfectly. If you ask me, I loved this chapter... and can't wait to read what happens next...

Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! More to come soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 26

enjoyed. I'm glad Xander has finally realized he needs to sort things out

Author's Response: Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 26

This has a lot of stuff going on, things getting physical between Buffy and Will was sort of inevitable. I like the way you paired that with the information about Xander's trip and Will's bitterness there.
It creates suspense on a few different levels.

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 26

I liked this chapter. I think the pace will start to pick up once graduation comes. I don't know how they can maintain any relationship once they are on opposite sides of the US, I suppose they can call and use web videos....
I can't wait to see what the next chapter has in store for us. I know you said Will is more affectionate when he's been drinking, so I'm wondering if that is the only reason he kissed Buffy.

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see...;) I don't want to give anything away yet! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 26

i'm not sure it's dragging perse, 'cause there's a lot to get out about the characters, not necessarily the plot just yet. i'm still confused why xander has basically cut himself off from his best friend for six months. and i can understand will's anger regarding xander. unfortunately, it makes it all that much easier to leave it behind. and anya - she's right about so many things. how will buffy copy once he's gone (cause he's gonna leave - as much as he cares about her, he's gonna leave)? i can see her going down two separate roads - the self-destructive (want, take, have, etc) or the depressive one ... here's to hoping i'm wrong ...

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see...;) I don't want to give anything away just yet! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 26

I have been waiting for the big moment when Spike decided to leave and find himself but am very glad that Buffy and he are working out some differences before they go. Hopefully they will come to a resolution soon. Great chapter.

Author's Response: They still have the whole summer to go before he leaves...so there's still a lot of stuff to work out! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter 26

Thank god they are finally kissing! I thot I might blow up from all there UST. Anya is right, they are in a relationship, and since it is all likely to go to hell anyway, they may as well enjoy themselves now. Cause I like reading about it, and they would surely be less miserable if they could just be and stop having to guard themselves so damn closely. College isn't forever, and sometimes, all you can do is try. Hope she doesn't push him away. Update soon.

Author's Response: They can only keep their hands off each other for so long! You'll have to stay tuned and see what happens...;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IamGhost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 04:07 am Title: Chapter 26

Oh, I missed a chapter...
Anyways, I like where this is going. Curious about that road trip and I completely understand Will. Loved the last bit of Spuffy action :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked! Spuffy action will continue in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Cheyenne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2011 - 02:35 am Title: Chapter 26

I like this story. I wait for each and every chapter, cause I'm hooked, but I agree, we are kind of in a holding pattern right now. I liked this chapter, and hope to get more soon.

Author's Response: I'm glad I've hooked you in! I'm trying to pick up the pace a bit more in the coming chapters. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2011 - 06:57 am Title: Chapter 25

I'm glad Xander is talking to someone.

Author's Response: Me too! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2011 - 05:19 am Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: You are welcome. Next chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2011 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 25

We've made some kind of progress with part of them and the others are still hanging around denying what they want from each other. Don't think they're going to make it til August without combusting. Though I do look forward to watching them try. Update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, you'll just have to wait and see...;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2011 - 01:11 am Title: Chapter 25

Loved the update! Anya is so openminded and blunt.. of course she'd be the one to understand. I feel Buffy's hurt because Xand hadn't confided in her as he did with Anya.. But at the same time I'm very happy that Xander opened up to -someone- at least.
can't wait to read some more...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I felt that Xander needed to be more open about himself, so he's definitely making progress. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2011 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 25

awwww - such a sweet moment between buffy and anya. i'm glad buffy isn't pushing (of course, she already has her answer, but still ...) and of the course the awkwardness between buffy and will - so sad! i'm not sure what i'm really rooting for - he's too excited for his art future to wish him to stay (even if he'd get buffy in the process), and if he didn't stay he may end up resenting the missed opportunities ... quite the angst for our two favorite characters!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked that! Definitely angst, but life forces people to face these situations all the time.. Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2011 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 25

I'm relieved that Xander came out to Anya. So interested to see how this is going to go. What are you going to school for?

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Xander needed that. I'm going to school for painting, actually...graduating in May...then real life!

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/16/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 25

Ahhh, that was sweet! It's nice that both Xander and Buffy have someone, even if Anya is a tad awkward. Xander is making good steps. Now Spike is still stuck in the same holding pattern. It will be good for him to leave just so he knows what he has right in front of him

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I felt that Xander needed someone to be open with. Will has some stuff to get through, that's for sure. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rebecca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2011 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 24

Great last couple chapters! I like the pacing of your story. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it! More to come soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2011 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 24

Those two are not going to make it to August without combusting. Though, watching them try is quite amusing. And Anya is just the devil's advocate they all need. Update soon.

Author's Response: Hehe. Stay tuned to find out if they do! More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2011 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 24

Was on the way home from work and the song Don't Let Go by En Vogue came on. I can't even remember the last time I heard it. I thought of your story right away, it just seemed to fit.

Author's Response: I had to go on YouTube to remind myself of which song that was, but yes it is definitely fitting. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 24

devil's three way.
Go Buffy, get Xander to talk.

Author's Response: She will eventually! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 24

Will's take on the coffee menu-it cost's a dollar more-made me giggle out loud.
Finding an update this morning, made my day. :) Keep it coming, love.

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story (and my coffee jokes)...thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 24

i'm liking how buffy and anya are relating. and anya - somehow i don't see her taking it so bad when xander comes clean. actually she might take it bit 'better' than another woman would ....

and atleast buffy and will are friends again. but i'm wondering how bad it'll be when he does leave, and buffy's left behind .... will angel or riley appear, or ben or parker ... hmm - it'll definitely be a new chapter in her life when he does leave ... looking forward to more!

Author's Response: There are lots of things to come and you're definitely on to some things....Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 24

So, is there a Devil's Three way scene in the works? I like how stupid Will and Buffy are being. I know that sounds like an insult, but it's not. What they're trying to do is such a teenager thing to try, I think. As always, really enjoying the story!

Author's Response: No scene in the works now...but I won't rule it out. ;) I know exactly what you mean about the stupid thing, and teens are definitely stupid. Glad you liked! Thanks for the review!

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