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Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 24

heh... the awkward moments.. And devil's three-way..with two Wills? Yum :)
thanks for the update! loved it.

Author's Response: I must admit, I have a great love for threesome fics involving two versions of Spike. Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: IamGhost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 10:08 am Title: Chapter 24

Spuffy Realm, I got it :)
Poor Anya, it's just not fair of Xander to be with her if he's not really into her..
I love how you don't rush things in this story btw, yet you update so often! :)

Author's Response: I absolutely hate when Spuffy stories are rushed, so I did not want to do that! Good things come to those who wait. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 24

"The devil's three-way thing" lol

Thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed that! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: IamGhost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 23

Nice one, I'm glad they're talking again. I hope they can be more than friends eventually but we'll just have to wait and see, right? :)

Author's Response: What's the name of this site again...? ;) It'll take a while, but we'll get there. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter 23

well atleast they're talking again. let's hope it doesn't prove to be a mistake, as buffy fears. kinda like how buffy didn't put up with xander's condescening tone/knowledge.

Author's Response: It's hard to keep those two apart! Glad you like! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 23

That was so bittersweet.

Author's Response: Yup! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

Glad to see they're back together. He's so much more persistent with Buffy than Xander. I wonder how that makes Xander feel? Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hard to keep the apart for long. Will's been more persistent with Buffy for a few different reasons, but mostly cause he doesn't think the Xander thing is his fault. More to come soon, thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 23

I'm so happy that they are trying....something to work at least. I bet it's gonna be hard keeping hands to themselves..or lips :D
I felt it when Will told Buffy about leaving all he knew behind without any parent support and not being able to even call her.
Beautiful story. I like where this is going. No way is it going to be easy, but it's real.
waiting to read some more.

Author's Response: Definite sexual tension! They have a long road ahead of them...More soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 23

love this story,,update soon

Author's Response: Glad you like! More to come soon, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter 23

Never a mistake letting Will into her life. We all suffer from wishing for that perfect fairy tale ending. Here's to hoping. Update soon!

Author's Response: They'll get a happy ending...eventually. More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2011 - 06:13 am Title: Chapter 23

I'm glad their on speaking terms again, and a bit worried about Xander knowing Will is bi and what he might do with that info. Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: Glad you like! More to come soon! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 22

i'm so glad we're seeing buffy and anya starting to be friends. i always loved anya's character - and not just because she was so funny. and poor will - xander's right; he really doesn't know WHAT he wants. looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I love anya as well and wanted to integrate her into the story more. being a teenager is a confusing this, so it's justifiable. More soon, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: IamGhost Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 08:30 am Title: Chapter 22

Oh wow, just found this and read all the chapters up until now. Very interesting story! So curious to see what will happen next :)

Author's Response: Glad you like! More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2011 - 06:17 am Title: Chapter 22

Poor Will, doesn't know what he wants for sure. Or maybe, it's that he knows what he wants, but is trying to save everyone pain. No good end to this, but really nothing but hope. A true catch-22. Update soon!

Author's Response: Good point about the catch-22! More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 22

Maybe Xander does have a point. He didn't seem to know what he had until it was gone and I can see why Buffy is upset with him. Hopefully she'll still talk to him though. Next chapter soon please!

Author's Response: He does have a point, and Buffy and Will have some stuff to work through. More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 22

Still stalking the site for my daily fix. :)
Mad Men is very sexy. I could totally see some Spuffy hotness there.



Author's Response: Definitely hotness! Look out for that one once this gets closer to the end! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 22

I'm really hoping that Buffy and Will can resolve some of their issues and I'm glad Buffy's befriending Anya.
I love this fic, so I'd be happy to read any spuffy fic you write.

Author's Response: They're in a weird, confusing place right now, so they have some stuff to work through. Anya will become a bit more prominent in the story, for a few reasons. Glad you like! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 22

This was really interesting, glad you're developing Anya's character a bit. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Anya is one of my favorite characters from the series and she has an important part to play here, so I had to include her! More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 22

*Love* this fic! I love Buffy's strength to stand up for herself even though it's difficult for her to do! (I'll admit I also quite enjoy that it means Will is pursuing her for a change...even though he says it's just to be friends/because he misses her)
Also really enjoyed Anya in this chap! Like I've said before, I love your use of the secondary characters in this fic!
And, I like your idea for a MadMen based fic! I love office based Spuffy, so I find this idea very intriguing :) I'll definitely check it out!

Author's Response: The pursuing couldn't be one sided, I love it as well! I'm trying to bring Anya into the story a bit more, she's one of my favorite characters from the series. I'm actually quite excited about the Mad Men fic, I love office Spuffy as well, so look out for that in the future! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow i just read this from start to finish and im totally hooked, i love how open minded that characters are about their sexuality etc can't wait to read more

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 22

He tried to tell her something with that kiss. Just like she did to him before. Spike is quite persistent :)
I love Anya!
Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: He's definitely trying to tell her something! I love Anya as well, so I needed to make her a more prominent character in the story. More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter 22

Just caught up with a few chapters. Looks like ch. 22 posted twice?

Anyway, thanks for posting! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out! Fixed it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 07:01 am Title: Chapter 22

Go spunky Buffy. Hmm intersting about Ayna/Xander.
Now I'm really curious about the Spike/Xander fallout.
I also wonder what Spike's next move is going to be.

Author's Response: Well, stay tuned to find out!! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rkm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2011 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter 21

go buffy - LOVED her last paragraph/statement!

and i'm glad we're seeing xander again, and not in a negative way. i always thought xander was smarter than he was ever given credit.

looking forward to more of this entrancing story!

Author's Response: I thought that last thing was pretty good myself, not to toot my own horn or anything. ;) I'm definitely trying to bring Xander back into the story. More soon, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2011 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 21

Awe...my heart is breaking for them. They are both so stubborn, strong, and sensitive at the same time. So much love to give but so afraid to let it go. Please update soon. Lovely chapter and a great addition to the stories on here. I am surprised it is your first Spuffy fic by the way. Very good. Better than good!!

Author's Response: I feel for them too! I spent a lot of time lurking around on this site, so I've read a ton of fics and learned what's good and what's not. It took a lot for me to post this, but I'm glad I did! Thanks for the review!

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