Date: 10/25/2011 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter 8
I just knew the test was a kiss! Classic fairytale storyline....I love it!
Date: 03/24/2011 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 8
All the characters you've written that I've read here so far are really in character, but especially this:
"She stopped in the doorway and looked back at him over her shoulder. “I just want to make it clear that if I didn’t like the dress, I wouldn’t wear it.”
and this:
"She hated bullies; she couldn’t let the crowd tease him. If necessary she’d deal with it high school style."
Are so VERY Buffy, I think I squealed with delight.
Poor William loves her so much, he didn't let her fail the test. I just wanna squish him!
Date: 03/14/2011 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awe Buffy tries to protect William (the bullies, when dancing).
Uh-huh, not good who William vanished. Sounds as if he shouldn't have told Buffy. Is he to be punished now?
Date: 03/13/2011 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 8
Noble William, so concerned about her welfare that he has broken one of their cardinal rules. What indeed will come of him, and how will Buffy feel about it. She already cares for him too, too much. Perhaps, she can save him... Update soon. Still with you. :)
Date: 03/12/2011 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh my... Where did Spike vanish to? Loved it of course.. I hunger for more! :)
Date: 03/12/2011 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 8
He is such a sweetheart.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
Hope William will be ok! Can't wait for more!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
I'm totally on board! Please, please update soon.
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter! I wonder what the consequences are for divulging the test. Hopefully Buffy will help him. Please update soon!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hope William won't be punished for letting her know about test. Poor sweet boy...
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
Definitely still on board! Can't wait for the next part!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
I assume Buffy will be able to go back home now and something will happen to William.. 30 days?
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
I've been planning on reading this one and this morning I finally sat down to do so and I can't tell you how much I love this story!!! Really looking forward to the next update to this really wonderful, original story!!
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, please update soon, you left us at a nasty cliffhanger :( I am still really enjoying your story
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
One, if not the most, creative plots I've ever come accross.I love it. I really hope you finish it.