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Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter 8

I just knew the test was a kiss! Classic fairytale storyline....I love it!

Reviewer: Sotia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2011 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 8

All the characters you've written that I've read here so far are really in character, but especially this:
"She stopped in the doorway and looked back at him over her shoulder. “I just want to make it clear that if I didn’t like the dress, I wouldn’t wear it.”

and this:

"She hated bullies; she couldn’t let the crowd tease him. If necessary she’d deal with it high school style."

Are so VERY Buffy, I think I squealed with delight.

Poor William loves her so much, he didn't let her fail the test. I just wanna squish him!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2011 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 8

Awe Buffy tries to protect William (the bullies, when dancing).
Uh-huh, not good who William vanished. Sounds as if he shouldn't have told Buffy. Is he to be punished now?

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2011 - 05:43 am Title: Chapter 8

Noble William, so concerned about her welfare that he has broken one of their cardinal rules. What indeed will come of him, and how will Buffy feel about it. She already cares for him too, too much. Perhaps, she can save him... Update soon. Still with you. :)

Reviewer: Shardallinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh my... Where did Spike vanish to? Loved it of course.. I hunger for more! :)

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 8

He is such a sweetheart.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 8

Hope William will be ok! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm totally on board! Please, please update soon.

Reviewer: anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter! I wonder what the consequences are for divulging the test. Hopefully Buffy will help him. Please update soon!

Reviewer: carrot Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

I hope William won't be punished for letting her know about test. Poor sweet boy...

Reviewer: nerfherder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 8

Definitely still on board! Can't wait for the next part!

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 8

I assume Buffy will be able to go back home now and something will happen to William.. 30 days?

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

I've been planning on reading this one and this morning I finally sat down to do so and I can't tell you how much I love this story!!! Really looking forward to the next update to this really wonderful, original story!!

Reviewer: Matinee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 8

Oh, please update soon, you left us at a nasty cliffhanger :( I am still really enjoying your story

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2011 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

One, if not the most, creative plots I've ever come accross.I love it. I really hope you finish it.

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