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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2011 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 14: Out of Time

great chapter. I love how this is coming together! Also loved Angel throwing a hissy fit...too funny! Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Yay! I wasn't sure how the Angel bits would go over since you don't get the pleasure of seeing him have his hissy fit. I'm even happier though that the story is still interesting after the reunion. Thanks for reviewing again. :-)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2011 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 14: Out of Time

So the girls are giving Angelus/Angel a back time.. And guess the girls are being attacked again..
enjoyed

Author's Response: Thanks. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

whether it's fighting against one another or on the same side, I've always loved how equally matched they were. You captured this well in this chapter. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Cool. Thanks! And a second BIG thank you for reviewing every chapter! Mwah!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

Argh!!! These two and the UST! I know they are both apprehensive but it's plain as the noses on their faces they desire one another. Things are looking bad for the slayers. Running to next chapter!

Author's Response: Love the enthusiasm! Yay!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 11: Time Alone

Nope, don't feel bad for the penis lady at all! Loved their interactions and the fact Spike is trying so hard to be good despite how much we all know he wants to jump her bones!!!

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: London Time

I should get a gold star, I got all your references! Even though, in typical Buffy style, she just walked away when she didn't want to deal with something, I was glad she called Willow and asked for help. Loved how Willow compared her relationship with Tara and her and Spike's relationship. I never saw it that way before. Great chapter. Oh, despite me not reading season 8, I'm enjoying your choices for this story.

Author's Response: ALL my references? Cool. There's more to come. Nice knowing someone will catch them. ;-) Yeah, we've seen Xander and Anyay's relationship presented as dysfunctional in fan fic, but I haven't seen anyone explore how Willow treated Tara - you know, with the mind violation, and the wanting Tara to sit back and shut up if she ever challenged Willow, etc. So glad you're enjoying the plot too!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 9: Losing Time

angel...busted!!!

Author's Response: lol Look out people! There's another Angel-bashing fan in the house!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 8: Time's Fool

Loved their interactions. Despite all their time apart, the UST is still ever present. Which in turn causes awkwardness. Great chapter

Author's Response: Cool!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 7: Same Time, Same Place

Awesome chapter. Spike, rightfully so, mistakes the penis lady for Buffy. Can't wait till the next chapter...Hey, I don't need to! Running to the next one!

Author's Response: Yay! This is my favourite chapter. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 6: Time to Kill

Nasty...penis lady's lair! As always, Buffy saves the day!

Author's Response: lol I like that phrase "penis lady lair".

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Biding Time

mmm...I sense an accidental meeting of our favorite blondes! Great chapter

Author's Response: Don't you love those? ;-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4: Next Time

oh no...penis monster=trouble

Author's Response: Penis Lady = funny :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: What Time Won't Change

always loved angel's and spike's interactions, and this time is no different. Ta!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, they're fun to write together. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: A Time to Dance

even though Buffy's in a world of sister slayers, she's still alone. nice chappie

Author's Response: Yeah. She seems even more alone in a sense because the other Slayers have each other. They're an obvious family. Thanks for reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2011 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Times Change, but the Song Stays the Same

Sorry about joining the party so late...interesting start. Onto the next chapter

Author's Response: No apologies necessary! Glad you're reading!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/05/2011 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

Darn, these Dragvloks are everywhere.
Ah I wondered about the telephone. Well at last they are on their way to L.A. anyway.

Author's Response: We'll see... ;-)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

Buffy and Spike sure make a great team! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: Toffeegrrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

Love this story. Great plot, dialogue & characterisations. Certainly one of the best WIPs in a sudden crowd of really good ones.
I thought Buffy took Spikes return well! Maybe there will be a delayed reaction to deal with her rejection issues? Or maybe she has just matured and got over it after 40 years! Really enjoying it. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your generous review. I agree about the great stuff out there right now. I specifically recall telling my beta that there seemed to be a renaissance of sorts happening right now in the world of Spuffy Fic. That you include my fic in that is.. well, thank you! Buffy's reaction to Spike is interesting. I think sometimes us fan fic readers forget the TV characters after we've read so much fic. There has emerged a distinct Buffy and Spike of fan ficdom who are actually a little different from the TV characters. For one, fan fic Buffy in post-Chosen stories is almost always "mourning her vampire" when I don't think the TV Buffy would have done it quite like we suggest so often. Look at Season 8. I do, and I see that Joss' opinion of Buffy's feelings for Spike is somewhere closer to the TV show than fan ficdom, but sitting in between them. Anyway, it has also been forty years where Buffy has been operating as if he was dead, and you're right, she's definitely matured. She' thinking before she's acting. She's being a bit more careful about what she does and what she betrays.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 - 06:14 am Title: Chapter 13: Crunch Time

That was great!! I love seeing the dynamic duo fighting together against a common foe. The other slayers are prably the ones on the unanswered cellphone and Angel is also on his way to L.A....can we say impending butt-kicking of the Angelic variety for keeping Spike a secret from Buffy? I really hope so...........great stuff here, can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: "can we say impending butt-kicking of the Angelic variety" That made me laugh - thank you! And thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

It's plain to see that Buffy doesn't want Spike to leave any more than he wants to::)) Very sweet. It sounds like they could both do with a bit of sweetness in their lives, especially when it's with another person who knows you as well as they know each other.............your fight scenes with the other slayers was brilliant...brutal, but brilliant. Those things are pretty gruesome and are turning slayers into hamburger. I'm looking forward to you fleshing it out and finding out why they're hellbent on destroying all the slayers..........Is there a mastermind behind them? Using them to "slay the way" so to speak, to get rid of the slayers, so they have no resistance to conquer, to carry out their plans? Looking forward to the next chapter::)) Well done! Great read! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I love the feedback on the action. Action rocks! Interesting questions about the Dragvloks. I can only refer you back to Chapter 2 for a reminder of the official reason for why the Dragvloks want the Slayers dead. Is there another reason? We'll see... Cheers. :-)

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 06:32 am Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

Buffy's grown up some since Spike last saw her. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: She has grown up some, but this isn't the first time she's fed Spike. She fed him in Season 4 when he was a captive (okay, doesn't really count), and she also took him in during Season 7 and fed him. She was only really unkind when she was depressed during Season 6. Glad you're still enjoying it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2011 - 04:04 am Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

Buffy is so cute! Spike must be going nuts here.
I'm really concerned about Gina - I like her and want her to make it.

Author's Response: Yay. I never expected people to respond to Gina the way they are. That's so cool! Buffy IS cute - just as cute as Spike. Glad you like her. :-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

Uh-huh... sounds as if Gina and Sonny are in big trouble, leading the Dragvlok to the slayers.
I'm glad Buffy could convince Spike to stay - now he just has to figure out Buffy, what she wants. Not so easy for him I fear. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, there's no reason for Spike to think Buffy wants him after all this time. He's bound to be confused! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. :-)

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

L-O-V-I-N-G this story! It's nice to see Buffy with some maturity and how the years have given each of them perspective without changing how they feel about each other.

Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review Leanne! So glad people are having fun reading this!

Reviewer: Hellkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2011 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 12: In the Nick of Time

I love this story. The pacing of their relationship is just right.

Author's Response: Excellent! I keep asking my beta reader if I'm going too slow with them. I just don't think we can move them any faster, you know? Thanks for the review!

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