Date: 07/03/2011 - 06:17 pm Title: Prologue
I'm loving this so far, curious as to what happens next! I've been religiously checking for updates!
Author's Response: That is so lovely to hear! Thank you! It warms my heart :D
Date: 06/30/2011 - 09:32 pm Title: Prologue
Pretty creative, only showing small snippets of their time together. The only thing that threw me was if they've known each other for that long, bleached and brown hair and different names would never erase all their memories. Maybe it's me since I never forget a face, but people I've known from when I was a kid, even if I was never that close to them as Lizzie and Will, I would always recognize. Despite that, I did enjoy the start. Looking forward to where you are taking this.
Author's Response: It's more to show that they've changed so much. And to be honest, it's been 7 years since they last saw each other. Some people who saw me like 3 years ago barely recognize me today even if I had been good friends with them. But thank you for the positive review. It means a lot ^^
Date: 06/30/2011 - 09:19 pm Title: Prologue
I have no idea what's going on. I love the details, though and look forward to finding out.
Author's Response: It will make sense! That's what I'm going for at least ^^