Date: 07/17/2011 - 08:38 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
Well the brunch was a bit awkward - hopefully things will get a bit better.
Author's Response: Yes, it was, and it was intended to be. I hope you lke the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07/16/2011 - 05:51 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
Great chapter. Poor Buffy, being put on showcase. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Yes, she was the focus of the party. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07/15/2011 - 07:14 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
I can just imagine how uncomfortable brunch was for Buffy! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad that came across well. When I wrote this chapter, I was so afraid I wouldn't be able to convey just how tense everything was. I'll be posting another chapter on Sunday more than likely. You'll get to see them interact one on one. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07/14/2011 - 09:27 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
I think Giles' words for more for what an arse William was being. Waiting for William/Buffy conversation about her "duties"..
enjoying
Author's Response: William has a good deal of hostility toward Rupert, and he believes it's with good cause, whether or not it is. He feels it's justified. I don't know if you noticed the bit about him as a child. I don't think he was an arse at brunch to anyone other than Rupert, and he didn't do that in front of anyone.
Author's Response: All of the chapter didn't get posted. You need to go back and read from the beginning. Sorry.
Date: 07/14/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
This chapter seems not to be complete -- it seems to start half way through. (I checked on another site to make sure). The initial part with the shopping and getting ready is missing. However, the whole chapter is great -- it suggests an interesting relationship will develop between these two. Hopefully Buffy can do something to make W. recognize his alcoholism.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the incompletion. I don't understand why that is. I copy and paste from the same site. I'll fix it right away. They will have an interesting relationship, and things will come to light about William's past. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07/14/2011 - 09:20 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
That would indeed be an awkward brunch to sit through. And already he's staring. Surely there are more reasons to his need for help, and previous dishevelment. Looking forward to their talk. Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, I wouldn't want to be there. Though his staring is not a need for help. They'll have one on one interaction in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Somehow the first part of the chapter wasn't posted. You need to go back and reread to fully understand
Date: 07/14/2011 - 09:02 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
Great chapter. I can sense the hostility between Giles and William, I'm guessing that Giles described Buffy differently to William. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: No, he described her accurately, but you're correct in assuming there's hostility between William and Giles. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: somehow the first part of the chapter wasn't posted. It's up now.
Date: 07/14/2011 - 08:52 pm Title: 3. Sizing Things Up
Really like this beginning. Very interested to see whefe this leads.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Author's Response: Somehow the first part of the chapter wasn't posted. It's up now.