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Reviewer: MInx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2012 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 35

How did I miss this chapter for so long? Lovely update, very sexy. Sorry I don't have something smart to say, other than I loved this and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Aah, Minx, you always sound smart, no worries. ;) And I'm positively delighted by your use of 'sexy'. :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2012 - 05:57 am Title: Chapter 35

It was well worth the wait! I think you got the dialogue banter down my friend. So now Buffy knows about Angelus' plan for her and the other Potentials. Good for Buffy for being her stubborn self. Lovely update, thanks!

Author's Response: Hee... I am delighted to hear that. Darn their chemistry... the dialogue just kept going off in lots of different directions. Good to know you liked the one I decided to go with. :D Thank you for reviewing, Veronica!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/23/2012 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 35

Great chapter! I love how well you write Buffy and Spike's personalities. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Love to hear that. :) Thank you for reviewing, Anna!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2012 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter 34

Just love their dynamic, and the fact that she is still a horrible driver. And interesting developments in the Angelus camp. Gotta wonder where that will ultimately lead, doesn't seem like Dru has it in her to deceive, but she's clearly surprised us before. Poor Xander, sorta forgot about him. Another ripple in this whole world. Awesome. Update soon!

Author's Response: Haha, Buffy and her driving skills are the stuff of legends. As for Dru, who really knows what's going on in her mind? we'll have to wait and see whose side she's really on. Promise more will be up as soon as I can finish it. :) Thank you for being sweet!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 34

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) Hope you'll enjoy the next one as well.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 34

Mmmh I don't think Spike will let Buffy drive his car again soon or teach her. *gg*

Would be good to have Dru as an ally, working against Angelus. Doesn't sound as if it will be certain what she'll decide.

Heh the road trip really sounds not boring - looking forward to more fun.

Author's Response: Hee... I'm pretty sure he learned better. She did warn him though, so it's his fault for being persistent. ;)
Dru's unpredictable. Guess we'll have to wait and see where her loyalties lie.
Haha, glad to hear that! I certainly hope it won't be boring at all. Thank you for being lovely!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 34

Dru is not a compliant IMO as Eline thinks.. China is pretty far away from Cleveland and Dru has already helped Spike and Potential Buffy IIRC.. nice and lengthy diversion.. She did say that when the Sun was the highest it would be a problem and I assume that is the Summer and maybe even the solstice?
Nice to hear the true confessions from those two.. and hopefully more things to come with those things previously mentioned.
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Dru is a wild card. It's hard to tell what's her intention, whose side she's really on or whether she's siding with anyone at all. Only time will tell. ;) Good job on pinpointing the meaning of Dru's warnings. She was indeed talking about the summer solstice. More Spuffy interactions coming up. Hope you'll enjoy the next chapter as well!! :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 34

This chapter was amazing. Loved the bit about the skittles and the yummy pickles. Him trying to teach her to drive--it was such a real, teenage thing. Then you slam us with Dru and Eline and a dead baby. Oh my God. As a parent, that just hurt my heart. I have a rule that a writer can't kill a kid for unnecessary reasons in a story. You passed the test. That was gripping and chilling. Their dialogue was so perfect when they were lying in bed. This is the most mature, fully realized story you've written. Thanks for posting.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :) I wanted to kick off the chapter with something more lighthearted before I delved into the more serious interaction between Buffy and Spike and a darker Dru/Eline/Angelus scene. So awesome to hear you found it gripping and chilling! That baby death wasn't for the kicks, so I'm glad to hear it didn't come off that way. Also, thank you so much for the amazing compliment at the end of the review!! That made my day. :) My plan is to make the next story even better!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 34

You were right, this was lovely. Maybe sometime soon Buffy can sneek a peak at some poetry. And do... those things. Also, I really enjoyed Spike teaching Buffy to drive. I really am enjoying their relationship and having them make up after Spike's departure. Yeah I think it's pretty safe to say that I love this whole story and I can't wait to see where you go with it. =) Looking forward to more of that road trip goodness!

Author's Response: Glad you think so! :) Ah, 'those things'. Being in such close proximity to each other will wreak some havoc on them both, that's for sure. After all, we know that when Spike and Buffy are together sparks start to fly. There will be loads more Spuffy road trip goodness in the next chapter as well, so I hope you'll like it! :) Thank you for the sweet review!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 34

Ravenously awaiting the next chapter. More Spuffy!!!

Author's Response: More Spuffy indeed. :D Thank you for being awesome!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 34

The image of Dru rocking a dead baby is quite distrubing, good job.

Author's Response: Well, Dru IS very disturbed. :) Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2012 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 33

I'm so glad that Spike came back too. Looking forward to the road trip!

Author's Response: You and me both. :D Thank you for reading!!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 33

Loved the chapter and can't wait to see what occurs along their road trip!

Author's Response: Road trips are fun, so I hope you'll enjoy this one! :D Thank you for the sweet words!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2012 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter 33

A sweet and realistic good bye all things considered. Can't wait for more of them as a pair. It's been a while. I wonder what he'll confess about his coming back... bout her past. Um, just update soon, k?

Author's Response: Glad to hear you think so. :) And now to Spuffy fun/drama. The two of them within near proximity should be fun to watch. They'll have the chance to talk and get to know each better. I'll do my best to update as soon as I can! :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 33

It's better Buffy was able to say goodbye to her dad. He will feel better too.
Even if Buffy will be in danger now.
Enjoyed - looking forward to the road trip.

Author's Response: He'd have been very angry/sad if she'd just left without saying goodbye.. And I think Buffy would regret it.
Glad to hear that. :) Hope you'll enjoy the road trip!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 32

I'm here now. I've been a bit MIA so I'm starting to catch up just now.
Mmm Dru is still helping Spike, interesting.
So Spike's gut was right, Buffy is in danger. But being near a good weapon selection should help - at last I hope it wasn't a trap.
Glad it wasn't a trap - but Buffy knows the truth now. She will be hunted.
Spike is the right person to help, though.

Author's Response: Happy to see you back. :)
Indeed she is. But is she doing it out of the goodness of her heart or for some ulterior motive?
The weaponry definitely helped. If it weren't for that blade, Buffy would be in real trouble. At least she's aware of being in danger now. Now that she knows, it'll be easier for her to protect herself. And she's got Spike to watch her back as well.
Thank you for being lovely!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 33

A little help from Helen to cover up the real reason she needs to leave.. Just didn't tell Dad where though.. And would have been wrong for him not to know she was leaving.. ( Mom here ) LOL
Anyway.. off to Cleveland with Spike... is that Hellmouth #2 ?
Waiting for the big confrontation .. between Buffy and Spike ... and Angelus and his girls..
enjoyed... and thanks for the early update..

Author's Response: Ellen got Buffy's back. :) Good Mom point, btw! I thought I put it in but I must have been distracted. I'll add it in. :)
Ah, yes. Hellmouth the 2nd. It's quite a long drive to get there. ;)
All that shall happen in the upcoming chapters. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Pam!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 33

At least Hank won't be worried sick about her. Love their banter.
I bet Spike will stick to her like glue now.

Author's Response: Good thing she got to say goodbye before leaving, even though it was hard. :) Haha... you bet he will! And banter will inevitable ensue. ;) Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 33

This was a lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you, Minx!! :) Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2012 - 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 33

I love this chapter & the interaction between Spike & Buffy! Can't wait to see what happes now...

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that! :) It was fun to write as well, and there should be some fun banter coming up in the next update. I hope you'll like!

Reviewer: andrea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

perfect story

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :) You're awesome.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter 32

Strong Buffy, glad that she knew that Spike would be there for her. Good thing he trusts his gut. And thank heavens that Ellen is one of the good guys. A couple of seconds there where it could have gone either way, but I'm glad she's good and understands enough. Love that she used to be married to a watcher, does kind of explain the amazing weapons collection. Was that the scythe Buffy was connecting with? So very glad that they are back together again. I wonder if the alone time will give them a chance to share their feelings. Not easily, of course, but eventually. :) Update soon!

Author's Response: She's handling things pretty well considering the sudden turn of events. You'll see more of the fallout int he next chapter, which should be up very soon. Yup, Ellen is one of the good guys. I had her whole background story about being married to a watcher made up as soon as I introduced her. I like that you weren't 100% sure about her though. ;) The weapon wasn't scythe... exactly. But it's something very similar. Spike/Buffy moments coming up! I'm very excited about it as I missed writing their interactions. Now we'll see them develop the connection between them more thoroughly. Thank you for the sweet review!!! :)

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2012 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 32

Loved the Spuffy reunion! I feel bad for Buffy and her dad. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Love to hear that! :D I missed writing their interactions so I'm glad they reunited as well. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2012 - 09:37 am Title: Chapter 32

Ah, Dru.. a little help to William/Spike.. and now through Hallie she understands her delimma.. Magic weapons.. from Ellen.. wondered if her husband was a watcher.
Now about the original knife she gave Buffy?
Waiting for more with Spike and Buffy.. and of course a meeting sooner of later with Angelus and Spike's girls..
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Dru is sneaky when she wants to be. Yup, Ellen's ex is a watcher and he sure had to be mad when she took all those antique weapons from him. *g* It proved to be a good thing for Buffy.
The original knife was just a gift, it didn't have any special meaning or powers. :)
Spike/Buffy interaction coming soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Pam!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2012 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter 32

Mmm, knew they was more to Ellen than meet the eye.
Well it looks like my mob has to be disbanned unless we move our focus.
The first section made me think I missed a chapter, than I saw the six hours earlier. I am all like duh. I was wondering how I missed a chapter when I didn't.
Love the reunion, so Buffy and Spike. Fluffly would not become their meeting.

Author's Response: You were very right!
Good thing Buffy handled Halfrek herself. No mob needed. ;)
Haha, sorry! Nope, no chapter missage. I went for the whole 'let's jump into the middle' to keep you on your toes. lol
Agreed. I didn't want go for a fluffy reunion in this case for that exact reason. Thank you for the yummy review!!! :)

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