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Reviewer: andrea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

finally, I loved every word of it

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me!!! :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 24

Heh :) Even without memories they still manage to bicker around. ;)
And they are still very much attracted to one another, even without memories. But maybe it was even easier without them because they forgot about the "normal" world waiting outside.
Enjoyed the update.

Author's Response: Hee... you know them. They egg each other on and the bickering is inevitable.
You're actually very right. Not being aware of all the reasons they shouldn't be attracted to each other makes it easier to give in to the feelings that are already there.
Thank you for being wonderful!!! :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 24

Well, almost.. the attraction is there even without the memories and it would not have been the same..
So the locket had their memories trapped inside.. including the ones of her mother and the vampires
enjoyed.. now for Spike and the book?

Author's Response: Almost, but fortunately not completely. Them having sex when under a spell's influence would only bring badness. The locket was the reason the spell had gone wrong. Glad you enjoyed! :) Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 24

Love it, too tired to review more.

Author's Response: Hee... this is all I need to know. :) Thank you for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: PJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 24

Uh-oh. Buffy's not to happy with Spike right now. But I'm sure he'll find a way to make it up to her. Randy Johnson hehe. A few minutes with Buffy and he was certainly living up to that name! I'm loving the characterisations in this story, the build up of the relationship (not to mention the sexual tension lol) and the plot. It feels genuine and not rushed like in some stories. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Nope, she's definitely not with the happy. It was quite a misstep on Spike's part even though it really wasn't his fault. Shit happens, eh? ;) Hee... Randy Johnson should be Spike's real name with the way he acts sometimes. Thank you for the awesome review!!! :D You rock for not wanting me to get them both in the bed asap.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/27/2011 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 24

That was nicely written and very intense. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :) I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 23

If both of them have lost their memories, how are they going to how to get them back? They were making so much progress too! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: That's a very good question. ;) And I hope nobody will see the answer to that coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Veronica!!! :) I appreciate it.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 23

Heh - so Anya is indeed a Vengeance Demon - go figure.
And a dagger for her birthday *wonders if it is something special*.
And another nice birthday present for the eyes You're not wearing a shirt. That's good enough for me.
*gg* Seems Spike's thoughts went away too (what he thought Buffy came for).
But uh-huh.... sounds as if Spike has lost his memories, huh? Not good.
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hee... I'm sure everyone already more or less knew. Except for poor Buffy. lol
Ellen might be in possession of interesting collection, that's all I'm saying. ;)
Yay for half naked Spike!!
Spike's thoughts rushed south of the border if you know what I mean. *g*
Yup, memory loss for both of them.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, gorgeous!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 23

So damn much progress and now they don't even know who they really are!? I love it, and appearently Buffy has really sucky birthdays in this world, too. That really started as a horrible, no good, really bad day, and then at least Spike had the decency to be without a shirt. Love their little awkward dance, and her mixed signals. Can't imagine Spike's head not exploding from all that. And their amnesia, thinking that will be pretty interesting, too. Hope life enables you time to update soon. This story still rocks.

Author's Response: No worries, I don't plan on actually keeping them without memories for the rest of the story. ;) And I'll admit that there is a very particular reason why I wrote that scene, plot-wise. But that's all I'm saying. You minx, making me want to reveal plot! :D You're right on birthday suckage in the Buffyland. It was too good an opportunity to pass up. But hey, as you pointed out... shirtless Spike! I love it when you love something about the story. And I know it sometimes gets tedious, having to wait for an update, so I really appreciate you coming back to read and telling me you're still enjoying. Thank you!!! :)

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 23

loved that spike was all confused by what buffy meant by "do the thing" lol. i love the relationship you've given them, and i am patiently waiting for them to do that other "thing" hint hint ;) but seriously i really enjoy the pace of this fic, you're building the relationship nicely. and a twist! looking forward to the next chapter as always :)

Author's Response: Haha... I love how people seem to like that part. Poor Spike didn't use the bigger head to do the thinking, obviously. I bet you'd like them to do the 'thing'. Good things come to those who wait. *g* Love that you're enjoying the pace! I think you'll like what comes next though. ;) Thank you for the delightful review!!!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 23

Wow what a twist! Did Spike just lose his memory or did they both?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hee... that was the aim. ;) Both of them lost their memories, so it should be quite fun to see what they do to resolve it. Thank you for being lovely!!! :)

Reviewer: PJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

Well thats a fine pickle they've got themselves into! Should be fun to see them interact like this. But what about Angelus ..dum dum dum. I giggled quite madly when Spike realised she didn't mean THAT thing she meant the other thing.

Author's Response: Oh indeed it is! The way the spell gets broken should be quite interesting and I dare you'll like it. ;) Sorry for teasing you, I couldn't help it. Love that it made you giggle! :D Poor Spike got quite embarrassed for jumping to the wrong conclusion. And Angelus... hmm... there's a time and place for everything. ;) Thank you for being delightful!!!

Reviewer: claudia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 23

AWESOME!!!

Author's Response: Hee... THANK YOU!!! :D You rock.

Reviewer: JudythJ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter 23

You certainly have my attention. Good job, keep it up.

Author's Response: *grins* That's awesome to hear. :D Thank you for letting me know!!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter 23

I really enjoyed your description of the spell, it was evocative and intense. Great work. Funny bit with Anya and then with Spike getting the wrong idea.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :) I always enjoy hearing what you thought. Hee... guess Spike wasn't thinking with the big head in that particular moment. *g* Happy you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter 23

Ack - what a cliff hanger!

Enjoying this story - especially the banter between Buffy and Spike and Buffy and her dad, very cute.

Author's Response: Hee... sorry! ;) the chapter was too long already.
Yay, so happy to hear that! There shall be more of it coming, so I hope you'll keep on enjoying. :) Thank you for the sweet review!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2011 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh, No... Majic and those consequences..
Anya with her big reveal.. poor Parker I think.
Buffy now has her hint that the world has its layers lets say..if she can only remember who she is .. And the dagger .. ?
Maybe Ellen's husband was something more than a "regular guy".. and might have the answer to Spike's Gem problem?
Giving a girl a dagger is kind of an odd gift for her birthday..and 18th at that.. Spike should be happy now.. But the gun seems to still be in the picture LOL
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Looks like it backfired... again. The question is 'why'?
The boys at school better watch out for their prized possessions (i.e. the family jewels). *g*
She was understandably upset by the new developments, but it's better to know the truth.. at least a part of it.
Ooh, I like that you're wondering that. You'll have to wait and see though. ;)
LOL Well, Buffy is an odd girl and this version of her would hardly appreciate a pink sweater or dangly earrings. A dagger is more up her alley. Oh yeah, finally 18. ;) Better watch out for that shotgun!
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Pam!!! :) I'm happy you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

Spike finally got the book he was after. Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: We'll see what he does now that he's got it. ;) Thank you for reviewing, gorgeous!!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 22

*snickers* @ when Buffy came home and caught her dad sneaking in.
Unexpected - didn't expect this to be in the parcel (gift).
So Spike needs to break the original spell - means Buffy will remember everything. That's a lot to take in for her if it will happen.
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hee... that wasn't awkward at all. ;)
What can I say? I like to be unpredictable. *g*
The reversal of the original forgetting spell is their best option, but God knows what happens. It might be unexpected. ;)
Happy to hear that. :D Thanky uo for being awesome!!!


Author's Response: *Thank 'you'... sheesh, my silly fingers can't seem to type properly today

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 22

Another step closer, though he is much more aware of what is going on than she is. And thankfully both are more aware of what is going on than Hank is. :) Gotta have some levity somewhere. Though, now that he has what he has been searching for, I wonder quite what he'll do with it. He needs to fix things with the spell, and deal with Angelus and the harem, but what does he do about her? Very exited by more. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yup, Spike knows more than Buffy does at this point and that's mostly because she's not aware of the supernatural. But she'll find out eventually. Who knows? It might be sooner rather than later. ;) Haha... poor Hank would have a heart attack if he knew. As for Spike and the info in the book, you'll get to see what he does with it as well. But before he deals with Angelus he needs to help Buffy, doesn't he? Let's just hope it doesn't explode int heir faces. Thank you for the wonderful review!!! :)

Reviewer: emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

oh im enjoying it! love the story ;)

Author's Response: *beams* You're awesome. :D Thank you for reviewing, emma!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 22

Gosh she is a nutty old bat. Aww that explains so such about them two.

Author's Response: LOL! Indeed she is. :D Thank you for making my giggle!!!

Author's Response: *me

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 22

It's exciting to see the plot coming together. I liked the moments with the witch; she has enough personality to make exposition fun. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Hee... I love that you found it exciting! I had lot of fun writing that interaction between Spike and Mrs. Baum, so I'm very happy you think she was made it fun. :D Thank you for the yummy review!!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 22

Interesting... can't wait to find out what will happen if Spike reverses his memory spell.

Author's Response: You shall find out in the next chapter. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing, Anna!!!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 22

Enjoy the story.. but School First..
Gotta love the Old Witch.. Now to see what else is in the book.. But she does remember Spike..
And yuck on Buffy catching Dad on his "night out". Guess he didn't notice the jeans.. LOL


Author's Response: Thank you for being understanding. You rock!
I had a lot of fun writing Mrs. Baum, so I'm glad you liked. ;) Haha... I love how you found Buffy catching Hank sneaking 'yucky'. I assure you Buffy felt the same way. *g* Good thing though, he was too distracted to notice the wardrobe change. Thank you for reviewing, lovely!!! :D

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