[Report This]Date: 08/25/2011 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter 6
Faith seems to know something, though what exactly I cannot be sure. Glad she's pulling William out of his shell. Boy could sure get into some trouble now. :) Lovely. Update soon.
Author's Response: She does know something......you'll get a glimpse into that next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Gets me so happy to see that I may be successfully writing something interesting? Maybe? Lol
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2011 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It means so much that you've been on board for every chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2011 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad Buffy and William made up and decided to be friends, but I wonder what's going on with Faith? Hmmm.
It's cool that she's trying to help William out. Hope he starts feeling a little more comfortable so he can start rocking his new look.
Author's Response: I really wanted to keep him true to himself. Even though he allowed her to upgrade his look a bit, I like that it really won't effect who he chooses to be as a person. When alls said and done, he's a great person, besides that initial shyness, but most people start out with looks so now he's approachable. I hate that this is the case most of the time but.....example look at Susan Boyle. Anyway thank you so much for reading and for your review! It means the world to me!
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh, poor William! That's kind of a sucky way to find out you have no chance with the girl of your dreams. I hope he doesn't decide to move out, not when he's finally got the possibility of friends.
Author's Response: Okay so thank you so much for all your reviews, they were truly a joy to read! I think William may just be okay, but Buffy definitely needs to explain why she didn't tell him straight out.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
He's hot and he can cook. Perfect roommate. Loved the shy sparkage, too cute!
Author's Response: I'll take a guy who likes to cook anyway, though it may not be too great for my waistline lol.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Poor William, having to suffer through the agony of a half-naked Buffy! Oh, the horror! But he'll soldier on, I'm sure. LOL.
Author's Response: Haha you make me laugh. Loving these!
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Buffy secretly pining for William for all those years, even going by his job to sneak peeks at him. She's got it bad.
Interesting that she's with Faith. Wonder how serious they are if Buffy's thinking about William all the time.
Really liking this story!
Author's Response: And now the next one...
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2011 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loves me some shy William!
I love how he's completely astonished because Buffy actually knows his name. Too cute!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! About to read your next one lol...
[Report This]Date: 08/17/2011 - 02:32 am Title: Chapter 5
Wonder what she was trying for when she neglected to tell William the true nature of her relationship with Faith. Sure is going to be interesting now that he knows. Cause, really, I think she's kinda into him. Looking forward to where this goes. Update soon!
Author's Response: Well I think she has a little explaining to do, that's for sure. Thank you so much for reviewing, made coming back from vacation awesome! More to come shortly!
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sounds a little like Buffy is grateful to Faith for some reason. Can't wait to find out more!
Author's Response: Yes, it seems like she is ll. I'm glad your enjoying it and thanks so, so much for continually reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2011 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Nice story line. Please keep it coming.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'll try to have the next chapter ready by Friday maybe.
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think I love to read the comments as much as I like reading the story. It's fascinating glimpsing into what people think. As for me, I have no idea what I'm thinking about with this direction. I need to wait and see more of what their relationship is about and where it came from. As a side bar, my friend from college, Big (real name) had a term for girls like Buffy: Bugs - Bi Until Graduation. Yes, a little crude but it fit how many girls would experiment in college until finding themselves gravitating towards one side or the other.
Author's Response: Yes, I'm surprised by some reactions too. Everyone is entitled to their opinion though and I like being able to stir a reaction out of people. I love your sidebar and I know it's true, there are many different types of relationships out there. I wanted to try and represent something different that may not be in many fics. Sometimes I personally feel that claiming to be Bi is unfair, just making your pool much bigger. But some people genuinely are and that's how it is. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Really liked the changes. This chapter was so evocative of actual college parties I've been to where people just hang out and it's low key.
Author's Response: I'm glad you pointed out to me what could make it better, I always appreciate your opinions!
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2011 - 07:31 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow so happy you updated cuz gotta tell you this fic is addicting. I love how William is so William in your fic but a little Spike is showing with the music and I can't wait to see how William grows living with Buffy. I'm not sure how I feel about Faith and Buffy's relationship, Faith seems very possesive.... but I trust in Spuffy and know they will find there way to each other. Please update soon I really can't wait to see where your going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you like how I'm trying to incorporate little pieces of Spike into William. I wanted him to show signs of there's more underneath then what may be apparent if that makes sense. Your right, there will be a way to Spuffy of course, I wouldn't have it any other way!
Date: 08/15/2011 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Yeah I thought I'd give this a try, but what's the point. Buffy's gay she's in love with Faith, so I don't see the point anymore. And there's nothing more boring than Buffy/Spike 3somes. William should get the hell out of that apt. before his heart is really broken.
This is definitely not Spuffy friendly. Sorry.
Author's Response: I did say Buffy had previously had a bf, so she may not be gay. This is the first chapter I've really even shown more into the Faith relationship and I do have a direction for it in mind. Thank you for your honestly though. It is only the beginning, I've read lots of stories where either or both characters are in love with someone else. I'm sorry if you choose not to read anymore but please don't assume that this is over before it really starts. I do appreciate your honestly and your reviewing, either way.
Date: 08/15/2011 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 5
i didn't realize buffy and faith were actually together and supposedly in love, i thought it was just a physical thing. everyone seems to like them together, now I don't see any hope for william. i thought i could give this a chance, but now i really don't think i can continue. it would be different if she was with a man, but it's hard to turn a lesbian and i really can't read any threesomes.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honest review. I'd like to assure you that this does have a definite direction and I never put in any warnings for threesomes and I don't know why everyone is jumping to that conclusion. It's a lot of guys dreams to imagine maybe but that doesn't mean anything. Obviously this will be Spuffy or else it wouldn't be allowed to be on the site. I do appreciate you being honest and it is only the lead up to everything.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2011 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter! Wondering how Faith will fit into the situation.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you reviewed!
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2011 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Sparkage is always of the good. Can't wait for the next round. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate you taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2011 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
Like the story so far..very original. please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Glad you're interested!
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2011 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was great! Love the changes you made. They're so sweet with each other. Can't wait to learn more about Faith, too.
Author's Response: Thanks, Minx! Couldn't have done it without you!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2011 - 06:51 am Title: Chapter 3
And so it begins! I look forward to many more awkward moments between the two, er three of them. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I'll update at some point this week.
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2011 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08/06/2011 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter 2
Love that she's had the thing for William the whole time. And that she has a thing going on with Faith. I think it will be very interesting if William does move in. Perhaps the girls should put on a show to help convince him. :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 08/05/2011 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 2
I love the twist in the end I wasn 't expecting the oral giver to be Faith. Heck I wasn't expecting the person to be female. Nice twist.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That was the reaction I was trying to elicit. It's nice to hear I was somewhat successful lol.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2011 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I enjoyed this chapter:). It was cute, I liked reading it. The reviewers who didnt may just be a bit uptight? I do agree with minx in some ways? But I'm hoping I like where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I really hope you like where I take it too!
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