[Report This]Date: 07/08/2012 - 09:28 pm Title: Week Seven
Just wanted to tell you what a great story this is. Lots of detail and flashbacks to the past. Can't wait for the breakup between Angel and Buffy - it will come soon right?
I hope you'll be able to update soon!
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2012 - 06:43 am Title: Week Seven
Gotta agree with Buffy, despair alone could not take down Darla. Certainly interested in those final pieces of her puzzle. And any more nails that can be put in the Buffy/Angel relationship. :) Hope things come together for this story. Ready to nail Russel Winters to the wall! Update soon!
Date: 05/15/2012 - 06:51 am Title: Week Six, conclusion
I just love their random reveals about meat. Certainly bonds them in a way. :) And it seems he is becoming even more smitten with her. Not that that is hard to do. Hopefully she's a bit into him, now, too. Also looks like they are making progress on the case. Very interested to see where both are going. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, faithful reviewer. I'm glad you liked their non-case bonding. I was worried it would feel random, I guess I didn't overcome that. Also thought it might seem very OOC for Buffy, but I wanted William like Spike to go through a big change and there was the issue of his 'diet'...
Date: 05/14/2012 - 12:53 am Title: Week Four, conclusion
I started this story a few months ago, but I am just now catching up on chapters today. I am pleasantly surprised...It is so much "meatier" than I expected. I really, really like it.
Author's Response: I appreciate both the review and your continuing interest, thank you! And was that a pun?
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2012 - 09:39 am Title: Week Six, conclusion
I love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know. It puts a big smile on my face : )
[Report This]Date: 04/26/2012 - 01:41 am Title: Week Six, continued
I read this from the begining today and enjoyed it very much!! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know! Much appreciated.
Date: 04/25/2012 - 02:00 pm Title: Week Six, continued
partners in crime it seems.. and getting to know you..
enjoyed..
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment!!
Date: 04/25/2012 - 06:57 am Title: Week Six, continued
Glad they took a moment away from their sleuthing to suss out one another. Not ready to fall all over each other yet, but he's definitely interesting, at least a little. And he's going all detective, no one is trust worthy on us. It's kind of fun. Looking forward to more clues! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments, they made me smile! Yes, I think for Buffy he's kind of... there. And there again. Next chapter I think something changes. ;)
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 09:28 am Title: Week Six
Great update. Plot is moving nicely. Enjoyed both the Buffy-Faith and Spike-Andrew interaction. Will be interesting to see what Andrew finds.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and your review!
Date: 04/09/2012 - 02:18 am Title: Week Six
Loving the Faith character, seems like a good ally. And bashful, nervous Andrew. :) Got a lot of interesting details falling into place, can't wait til our power couple pow wow about what this all means. Sitting, waiting for more with rapt attention. Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad. I always loved Faith and Buffy as friends in S7. Thank you for your review!!
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2012 - 12:58 am Title: Week Six
NOT BORING... INTERESTING. YOU HAVE ALOT GOING ON IN THIS STORY, IT NEEDS TO BE LAID OUT. IM REALLY LIKING THIS!
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging comment!!
[Report This]Date: 02/29/2012 - 09:13 pm Title: Week Five
Ahh, Spike is growing! He wants more than just a panty dropper. As for Buffy, she has a very...umm...interesting relationship with Angel. He definitely has all the power. Especially considering how powerful she is in her own work life. And Angel for sure is not done with Darla (at least in my own head) and I think she knows that. His heavy breathing is awfully suspicious. Seems like she's yearning for even a bit of the passion that she witnessed between Angel & Darla that he's holding back from her. Time for her to move to somebody with blue eyes and a wicked smile!
Author's Response: Your review was awesome because it picked up on everything the chapter was trying to establish. Thank you!!
You will learn more about Darla in Week Seven or Eight, although probably not what you expect...
Date: 02/28/2012 - 07:25 am Title: Week Five
That was a very interesting flash back. We need to get Spike in there to confuse her even more. Clearly, when she's all upside down and sideways is the perfect time for him to sweep her off her feet. :) Lots of confusion. Want to know where they all go from there. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!
Date: 02/21/2012 - 09:15 am Title: Week Four, conclusion
Very cool. Love William and his curiosity about forensic re-enactment fetishes. Give it time, and CSI will really do an episode about it. They are pretty cute together. So glad I remembered that I was reading this one! Hope it doesn't take another 6 months... :) Update soon!
Author's Response: Isn't that whole show one big re-enactment fetish? LOL Glad we have both picked up the story again. Thanks for your continuing interest.
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2012 - 01:06 am Title: Week Four, conclusion
Glad to see you posted and you're still working on this one! I love this story. Hope things are going well in your life.
Author's Response: Hi Minx! Sorry I have been MIA. My email acct was deactivated a while ago. I'll try to contact you through the site. Hope you are well too!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2012 - 09:24 pm Title: Week Four, conclusion
Haha, it's like you knew that I got excited just hearing Faith's name. Thanks for letting me know, lol. I have to say, even though it's been a while since you've last posted, I was so excited to see an update. I really did miss this story. Even though we're talking about the same characters, you make them feel fresh. Not sure how else to explain it. I think Spike is right, they are definitely onto something there with that find. Thank you for the update!
Author's Response: Faith will not be integral (I think), although she will appear in the flesh eventually! I love her too. We'll see how it goes. Thank you so much for your support.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2012 - 11:39 am Title: Week Four, conclusion
Great story- love the plot and the grown up characterisations.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you are enjoying. Much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2012 - 07:17 am Title: Week Four, conclusion
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your continuing interest. Sorry for the hiatus.
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2011 - 06:10 am Title: Week Four
That was a lot of veiled history we got just then. Just like William, there are a lot more pieces laying out for this puzzle, just don't have them all put together. Pretty cool. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your readerly response! Veiled history is a perfect description. I love that you identify with his point of view too. I am working on it~
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 - 10:33 pm Title: Week Four
Wonder what happened to make Buffy leave the force. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yes, it involves Rona somehow. (She'll appear eventually.) Thank you for your comments!
[Report This]Date: 09/24/2011 - 05:25 pm Title: Week Four
Great chapter, can't wait to learn more about Buffy's previous career and its ties to the Dashawn case.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! Hmm, well we know she has some previous relationship with his sister Rona. And that the case involving Rona ended her career. And that Carlos used to date her. The rest I'll reveal, erm, figure out, eventually. ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/24/2011 - 07:18 am Title: Week Four
Love it :) you are really good with keeping the tension in the story :)
Author's Response: Ooh, I am thrilled you feel that way. I think I do like striving for that mode, and didn't even realize that fully until you commented. Hope you will continue to enjoy! Working on the next bit...
[Report This]Date: 09/24/2011 - 04:20 am Title: Week Four
Thank you for the update! I felt bad for Spike at the end there. Looks like Buffy will not be very forthcoming with her past. Good stuff though!
Author's Response: You're so welcome. Your response made my day. I feel bad for him too. He won't give up yet, though. More later this week... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09/23/2011 - 10:33 pm Title: Week Four
Like what you did with the chapter!
Author's Response: You are so sweet to flatter me twice. Embarrasses me! ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/23/2011 - 08:11 pm Title: Week Four
Great update! Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Hey, thank you! I'm working on it. I really appreciate your support.
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