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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2011 - 04:47 am Title: Week Two

Regarding him with a pitying look, she asked, “Don’t you ever pick a battle you can win?”

But I love that he always tries! Great start. And already they sizzle, even if it is with ire!

Author's Response: I love that about Spike too. I love that description, 'sizzling with ire.' I'll remember it.

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 01:40 pm Title: Week Two

Loving it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and letting me know you are enjoying it! Even though I am open to criticism too, it does make me feel relieved to know it has sparked some positive feeling.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 12:51 pm Title: Week Two

Jammed-packed chapter. Good on Buffy for not backing down. Love the chemistry between William, his friends, and Buffy. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am ecstatic that you think there is chemistry first of all, and that you also like it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 07:50 am Title: Week Two

Lots of daggers thrown in those words.. tough banter.
I assume because of the "kid" they will talk again. Waiting for their guards to relax a bit.
Love Cordelia's warning...
enjoy..

Author's Response: Thank you for keeping up with the story! Yes, interview with Carlos is up next. He is Dashawn's pal, but I think he will be a few years older, not a minor. We'll see. So glad you liked Cordelia's prediction. I hope it seemed like it had a dual meaning? And she seems to be clued into Buffy's life, doesn't she? I really appreciate your thoughts. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 07:14 am Title: Week Two

This is just fabulous. You are hitting all the right notes, catching my interest, making me wonder about the Buffy's mysterious backstory, and breathlessly waiting for more!

Author's Response: Aww, you couldn't have said anything more perfect to build my confidence. Thank you for taking the time to let me know! I hope you will like what's to come, shooting for end of this week.

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