Date: 09/30/2011 - 06:10 am Title: Week Four
That was a lot of veiled history we got just then. Just like William, there are a lot more pieces laying out for this puzzle, just don't have them all put together. Pretty cool. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your readerly response! Veiled history is a perfect description. I love that you identify with his point of view too. I am working on it~
Date: 09/26/2011 - 10:33 pm Title: Week Four
Wonder what happened to make Buffy leave the force. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yes, it involves Rona somehow. (She'll appear eventually.) Thank you for your comments!
Date: 09/24/2011 - 05:25 pm Title: Week Four
Great chapter, can't wait to learn more about Buffy's previous career and its ties to the Dashawn case.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! Hmm, well we know she has some previous relationship with his sister Rona. And that the case involving Rona ended her career. And that Carlos used to date her. The rest I'll reveal, erm, figure out, eventually. ;)
Date: 09/24/2011 - 07:18 am Title: Week Four
Love it :) you are really good with keeping the tension in the story :)
Author's Response: Ooh, I am thrilled you feel that way. I think I do like striving for that mode, and didn't even realize that fully until you commented. Hope you will continue to enjoy! Working on the next bit...
Date: 09/24/2011 - 04:20 am Title: Week Four
Thank you for the update! I felt bad for Spike at the end there. Looks like Buffy will not be very forthcoming with her past. Good stuff though!
Author's Response: You're so welcome. Your response made my day. I feel bad for him too. He won't give up yet, though. More later this week... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/23/2011 - 10:33 pm Title: Week Four
Like what you did with the chapter!
Author's Response: You are so sweet to flatter me twice. Embarrasses me! ;)
Date: 09/23/2011 - 08:11 pm Title: Week Four
Great update! Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Hey, thank you! I'm working on it. I really appreciate your support.