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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/15/2011 - 12:00 am Title: Week Two, conclusion

More characters come into view.. Angel especially. Don't hate him BTW..
And I see William is going to be nicer.. waiting to see what happens next.
Enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thank you, Pam S. Yes, Angel is tricky for me. It's definitely good/right that you don't hate him. In that phone call, did you get the slightest feeling that his work (more on that to come) was more important than Buffy's? Maybe more in her view than his? Re: William. Yeah, he's gonna try, anyway. Let's see if that works out for him! P.S. If I'm spoiling too much for you, just tell me to shut up. ;)

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 01:40 pm Title: Week Two

Loving it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and letting me know you are enjoying it! Even though I am open to criticism too, it does make me feel relieved to know it has sparked some positive feeling.

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 12:51 pm Title: Week Two

Jammed-packed chapter. Good on Buffy for not backing down. Love the chemistry between William, his friends, and Buffy. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am ecstatic that you think there is chemistry first of all, and that you also like it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 07:50 am Title: Week Two

Lots of daggers thrown in those words.. tough banter.
I assume because of the "kid" they will talk again. Waiting for their guards to relax a bit.
Love Cordelia's warning...
enjoy..

Author's Response: Thank you for keeping up with the story! Yes, interview with Carlos is up next. He is Dashawn's pal, but I think he will be a few years older, not a minor. We'll see. So glad you liked Cordelia's prediction. I hope it seemed like it had a dual meaning? And she seems to be clued into Buffy's life, doesn't she? I really appreciate your thoughts. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/13/2011 - 07:14 am Title: Week Two

This is just fabulous. You are hitting all the right notes, catching my interest, making me wonder about the Buffy's mysterious backstory, and breathlessly waiting for more!

Author's Response: Aww, you couldn't have said anything more perfect to build my confidence. Thank you for taking the time to let me know! I hope you will like what's to come, shooting for end of this week.

Reviewer: Crazface Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2011 - 11:15 am Title: Week One

I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know! Hope you will like chapter two too~

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 08:35 pm Title: Week One

Really, really enjoyed! The interactions between the characters were great. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you thank you for reading and reviewing! I can't tell you how excited I am that you enjoyed it so much. Will be updating weekly. P.S. I love Catharsis! I can't remember if I commented in my penname or anonymously, so let me just say again how much the interior drama drew me in.

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 03:18 pm Title: Week One

I love your story so far. William is arrogant and opinionated. Buffy is direct, stubborn and tough. This will be a great relationship I think. Great start, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I'm so glad you are responding to the characters. I love jerky Spike myself. (Hope he will not seem too jerky to readers.) I'll be updating weekly, hopefully more frequently than that. Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 01:30 am Title: Week One

I love what you have so far. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! And thank you for reading and reviewing. More by Fri.

Reviewer: Laur987 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 01:24 am Title: Week One

I'm really interested to see where this goes. Great premise, great descriptions. I'm not even a poker fan and I was following along with the game. Just so you know, you originally said Spike had a queen and a nine, so I was confused later when he had a queen and an eight. The only reason I even noticed was cause I was so engrossed in it. More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for pointing that mistake out so I could fix it! And I am very happy that you enjoyed the poker scene. It was a challenge to figure it all out. Glad it made sense and read well to you. Updates will be regular weekly at the longest. Thank you also for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2011 - 12:26 am Title: Week One

I think Buffy has some surprises ahead for William. And why would he listen to a charactor assessment from Harmony?

Author's Response: What a great comment! He should know better, huh? (Why) does he want to believe the worst of her? Hope you will enjoy the developments to come... You are a savvy reader ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 11:55 pm Title: Week One

Enjoyed the banter between Buffy/William. Little rich dogooder vs. the Law..


Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed. Hope you will like the revelations to come too. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ejmlam Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 11:25 pm Title: Week One

I hope you have more of this written. It is well-written, with lots of nice details. Frankly, it reads like a "real" book versus a lot of fanfic out there. Definitely promising! I am surprised that this is your first "creative" writing piece.

Author's Response: Thank you thank you for the (multiple) compliments, I am beyond flattered. I am very happy you are enjoying it. I have been a big reader my whole life but only tried fiction once way back in HS, so this is a fun new world for me. And I do have lots more written, but not in order so I will be working hard to sew everything together. I promise to do my best to update once a week at the longest.

Reviewer: hulettwyo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2011 - 10:46 pm Title: Week One

Liking it so far!
Love that the only thing William can come up with is "She has stupid hair." Too funny.


Author's Response: You are my first reviewer, ever, so thank you so much!! Yes, I was happy to work that quote in. Glad you enjoyed, more next week...

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