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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/04/2012 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 4

Very, very sweet Spuffiness!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really proud of this story and it means a lot that you read and commented.

Reviewer: Charlie Aome Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2012 - 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh this is so sweet! i just love it. now i'm super late for work, but you know what? it was totally worth it. i'm so glad i got to read this, after the epic that was Name. this was so great hun i really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I wanted to write something much smaller after finishing name.

Reviewer: sta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved both stories - It was great seeing their reunion. It was odd picturing her as a Kara particularly at the end when she didn't want to be called "Buffy." But I really enjoyed the interplay of all the characters and found it both original and true to form. Great work. I look forward to reading whatever else you have out there... Thanks :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have several things out here and look forward to your comments!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2011 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

OH I loved it and wished they was more, see what her friend said and Tara rejoining them, wish there was an epiloge to the story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: evelynferguson Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2011 - 01:43 am Title: Chapter 4

Love, love, love this story. Is that the ending ?

Author's Response: It is the ending. I just had this brief idea of what it would be like for them to be reincarnated. It didn't seem to fit with the tone of the rest of the story, but I was interested in how that scenario would play out.

Reviewer: Puddin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 - 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 4

Huzzah! You finished. Well, I loved that you had the balls to end "Name" so darkly, but I gotta be honest, this epilogue was really delicious! So many thoughtful touches. I especially liked the mirror. I also loved the thought that went into the changes in Billy's character - now that he didn't have the monster inside him. How he was more unguarded, gentler with her during sex, etc. Well done you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the changes in his character. Originally I put the mirror in because I was having a huge amount of trouble writing a love scene and thought it might be sexy. As soon as they got talking and the idea occurred to me of why he'd put it there, the tone changed and the whole thing fell into place without the naughtiness.

Reviewer: Sarra Ambrai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

This was the perfect balm for Name. Sweet, but definitely not without it's obstacles. Thank you for the fabulous ending!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter 4

So glad they got a real, honest to god happy ending and chance at peace. Love that there were no preambles. Eye contact, and "bam," the rest of their lives. A truly fitting ending to you interesting tale. Thanks so much for giving us some happy.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I love that you said, "Eye contact and 'bam' the rest of their lives." That was pretty much it, too. Everything that had happened to them was leading up to that point, really. They'd both figured out on their own that they couldn't be with anyone else given their history. Glad I could make you happy!

Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter 4

Amazing conclusion. Finally they have their happy ending! Thanks so much, Minx, for sharing! Big Hugs!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the conclusion and thanks for being so supportive!

Reviewer: hotbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2011 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 4

That was a very nice reunion. They havent lost their connection after all these years. what will happen next after this? thanks for the update.

Author's Response: The story is done. They just live their lives from this point on out being that they're regular people now.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2011 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2011 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

It's nice that they could have a happy ending after the sadnes of the earlier story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2011 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

Great ending. Clap, Clap, Clap, the good kind.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, hope the ending didn't feel rushed.

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