Date: 01/22/2012 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm ... interesting, Buffy taking pity on Spike. Of course, we know they both had a connection from the beginning, Buffy just too ... *whatever* to allow herself to admit it. Otherwise, why hadn't she killed him before? Had plenty of chances and vice versa... Can't wait to see how this goes...
Author's Response: The connection is explained in th next chapter.
Date: 09/26/2011 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
You know, I don't really enjoy reading POV from characters other than Buffy and Spike, but I really liked the Xander part. :) Kudos to you for writing so well! That bit with Spike was heartbreaking, but it was so awesome that Buffy gave him a chance to fight on her side.
Author's Response: That's an amazing compliment, thank you!
Date: 09/11/2011 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved the update! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 09/11/2011 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I can just imange Spike. And is it halloween already.
You know on EF, on my my review you got what I was going for with me saying it yay you. This is pre-chip Spike here, yes he has done good but it was for his selfish reasons. So far he has done more evil than good. We have not seen him change yet, so I would love to see you take on how he does it. So yay.
Love how you worked in those little plot changes, i wonder how those stepping on butterflies will affect things later on.
Author's Response: THanks for the review! I hope you can already see subtle changes in the dynamic--for one thing, the Wish never happened. For another, Spike has been more cooperative with Buffy much longer. For another, she feels drawn to him in a deep way, which didn't exist in the series until much later. That gets explained in the next chapter.
Date: 09/11/2011 - 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great update! Love the use of a cameo character. When I read your end notes I remembered her, and also remembered the "Dude" guy Spike dusted. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Glad you remembered! She's the girl in the purple sweater who asks if it makes her look fat, to which Sunday replies, you being fat makes you look fat. I wanted to give her a second lease on life.
Date: 09/11/2011 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Pity suck! I like the premise and the approach. And Xander.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the pity suck.