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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2017 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 9

Read this before - enjoying it just as much this time.

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2012 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 9

I love angst, so love the turn in the plot! Glad me being confused about what Spike really wants is intended ... I hate feeling like I'm missing something! :) Loved the balance of quips to drama in this chapter - very good. Also Spike's protectiveness and tenderness, of course - perfect. Ok, I'm ready to cry or be shocked and appalled - not sure which you have in store ... do your worst.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! Hope you like what's coming.

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 9

This is so much better than the plot of season 4! I always thought they killed Walsh off way too early. Her evil potential was Mears-level. Loved the Nazi and Indiana Jones refs. :) Remember when Spike ate a Nazi on Angel?

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought Walsh made an awesome villain, too. It was awesome when he ate a Nazi.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 05:53 am Title: Chapter 9

It felt like they were almost out of there, and now they are going to be apart. I'm not liking that turn of events too much. Hopefully the outside world will figure out that their friendly fighters need some assistance. Update soon, we can't leave them like that!

Author's Response: I'm glad it seemed like they were really going to escape. I was worried that the situation would seem like a pointless exercise, glad it was suspenseful. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter 9

Man maggie is a witch with a capital B.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2011 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 9

So close. Maggie is a witch with a capital B.

Author's Response: No argument here.

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

Buffy and Spike are in a lot of trouble. How on earth will they escape with all that technology?? Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 9

Seems Buffy is part of the Experimental Group.. Now to see if there is a difference in her blood that science can figure out..
Nice twist.. Maybe Dr. Oliver will be helpful to B/S in the future..
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

I really, really hate Maggie Walsh.

Author's Response: Right on.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow. Maggie Walsh is even more evil, self-absorbed and conscience-less than she was in the series. Makes for an excellent villain.

Dr.Oliver--hmmm. Can't decide whose side he's on (aside from his own...), or if he has a conscience. (Or maybe he's just taking a slightly different approach to the problem of The Slayer?)

Anyway, interesting chapter. I wonder if they're going to chip Buffy?

Author's Response: They won't chip Buffy, but you're the second person to ask that question. Can't tell you any more, or it will ruin the surprise. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

Aaaah, I want more!!! I had that tiniest bit of hope that they'd manage to escape, but I suspected you wouldn't make it that easy. ;) I'm SO curious to see what Spike and Buffy will do now, especially since they'll probably be separated.

I loved that you compared that scientist to Angelus. You know, I've always found Adam a bit lame, and wished they treated people running the Initiative as the real villain. It's much more interesting to explore humans that are capable of so much evil, and demons that are victims in the scenario. Love that you're doing that. :)

And also, awesome that you implement those bits of humour into what is otherwise an angsty situation. Can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I always thought Adam was a poorly executed villain, too, so I'm hoping to tweak that in my story. Season four has so much great stuff, but then the Adam stuff comes so thoroughly out of left field. Thank you for the compliment, glad you found the humor, humorous. Just read your update for "Chasing a Dream," and it knocked me out. I need to reread and comment later, but for now baby needs me.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

You are a cruel cruel person and I don't like you. Why did I read this chapter? I knew I should have waited until a few more were posted before reading but I had hope they might escape. That hope was crushed like a bug without an exoskeleton. Now I have to wait. I hate wait!

Author's Response: Why, oh why Demona? I hope you really don't hate me and I hope you stick with the story. I promise you one thing, though. Tara won't die.

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/03/2011 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 9

Help!! I've got to know what happens next!!! Great story, turning into one of my favs of yours.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wish I could tell you more but he only thing I can guarantee is that Tara won't die.

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