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Reviewer: Cavemenftw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/28/2012 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter 10

Yeah, I just didn't feel like reading about the subject, I think your writing style is pretty visceral and engaging. You capture character and keep a nice pace.

That last review really came off the wrong way. Sorry about that.

Author's Response: No problem. You weren't really insulting, I just had no idea how to respond. It's kind of like when my mom tells people that don't like potato salad that they don't know until they've tried HER potato salad. I think they know. You're just not an Initiative fan. It's cool. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Cavemenftw Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/20/2012 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter 10

Loved the story until the Initiative became a factor. Far too many stories use them. I liked the writing though.

Author's Response: I don't really know how to respond to that. Thanks for liking the first half?

Author's Response: I've never written about the Initiative before, this was my take on that whole season.

Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2012 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 10

I can totally see Dr. Walsh doing that. Glad to see Finn isn't completely comfortable with it. A rescue squad including Andrew would be pretty ... lame ... heehee! But hopefully also a tad funny and more importantly, successful! That is if the soldiers don't have any magical wards precluding a locator spell for Buffy/Spike.

Author's Response: You're really intuitive as a reader. Thanks so much for the dead-on comment.

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 10

Is Drusilla really the name of Caligula's sister?! Dr. Oliver is waay creepy. You did NOT do a GI Jane on Buffy!

Author's Response: Yes it is, yes he is, yes I did.

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10

Okay, so maybe I went a wee bit overboard on harshing on the Scoobie Gang, but you have to understand, you're pulling my heart strings here! That was like 2 days of torture! You made me care to much. Needless to say muy excellente story and I'm loving every second (even if you make me cringe).

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, even if you're starting to hate me.

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

Also, sorry for the typos! I meant "demonic Maggie Walsh". I like Riley still being a good guy. I think he was just screwed up and selfish on the show but not evil.

Author's Response: Your comments are kind of like the audience yelling back at a tense part in the movie when the girl is about to go into the haunted house alone. I love it!

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 10

It's official, Buffy has the worst friends ever. Here she is being tortured by the the demo if Maggie Walsh and they are of tra-la-la-ing with they're boy/girlfriends. Well, maybe not so much Willow.But still! How many times has she saved Xander's life and be can't even call to see if she's ok? It makes me tear up just thinking of it. I hope Spike can think of something and get her out of there soon because this torture! And I didn't mean to sound harsh in my last review, but you are just too good at making me care about these characters! Can you give any wee bit of hope?

Author's Response: Oh, hey now, she hasn't called them all weekend. That's only two days. They're not terrible friends, they've just got stuff going on. Besides, in the next chapter, they all realize what's going on and feel awful.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 10

The idea of Spike putting his "limitless ingenuity" to work is rather scary. Spike is endlessly inventive. It'll be interesting to see just what he comes up with.

And Spike bluffing Dr. Oliver! Clever indeed. His bluff plus Willow & Xander and friends making noise might be the thing that save Buffy from Dr. Walsh.


Author's Response: Glad you liked the bluff~ thanks for the commenting~

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 10

I HATE the initiative!! Your story makes me hate them even more. It was hard to read, but the story is so good I couldn't not read it.

Really hoping you don't make us suffer through much more before we see some light.

Author's Response: Don't want to give too much away. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

Buffy is missing and Willow is thinking of (Willow couldn't help feeling proud that a hulking, footballish guy like that would find her attractive, but he was so not her type.) Man her attitude makes me so mad sometimes. Buffy could be dead and she is like oh la la a boy likes me.
Those cigs will come in handy later.
Maggie is one mean, saddistic mother dog.


Author's Response: Maggie is mean. In Willow's defense, she's trying to rationalize this guy's odd behavior. It's not like she isn't worried about Buffy. I didn't mean to write Willow as selfish here, just that she's writing off Riley's weirdness initially because of what Professor Walsh said. I guess I screwed up there. Anyway, thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm not too fond of Riley, but I really like that you're not making him into an evil guy. He's very in character and I wonder how long it takes before he stops blindly following orders and does the right thing instead. And Spike may have lied about the Council protecting Buffy, but we all know Scoobies will do everything in their power to find her. Btw, what a great touch on Buffy's hair being cut. It's so heartbreaking and in a way equally horrible as the physical pain they're causing her. I'm loving this complex story SO much!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I intend to keep Riley in character. I got the idea for having her hair cut from a scene in "Jane Eyre."

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10

Maggie is totally insane! Forrest is not that far behind her. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You betcha! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

Maggie Walsh should have consequences for kidnapping, torturing and imprisoning Buffy. Hope that help will be on the way soon.

Author's Response: Agreed. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

So glad the troops are beginning to call themselves into action on this one. And I love adding Eddie and Andrew to the crew. If only he met Eddie before Warren in cannon, what could have been. And Xander and Dav's parents are priceless. Walsh has to be stopped, poor girl should not be put through this. And I wonder if Spike and his ingenuity with fire and cigarettes may help him to more than just a smoke. Here's to hoping. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliments!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 10

Yuck ... Buffy.. a pin cushion and test subject.. Riley still seems to have a little humanity and not 100% zombie soldier..
Guess Buffy's blood didn't give any hints to her abilities.. A little majic search by the Scoobies?
Waiting for Maggie to get her dues.. slowly.
enjoyed.

Author's Response: There will be a magic search, but keep in mind Willow is not the virtuoso witch she is in later seasons.

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