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Date: 05/10/2017 - 04:42 am Title: Chapter 17

Super Neat Story - glad I decided to read it again.

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Date: 01/23/2012 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 17

OH DRAT!!!!!!! That's what I was afraid of! You made him a real boy! Ok ... my only hope now is that the pseudo-Mohra can make him alive but not take away his super strengh and healing ... Please? Please don't turn him into William ... I mean, I love Wiliam, but Buffy needs Spike - {grumble, grumble} .... And gone three weeks? Wow, I lost track of time like they did ... And ok, yay!! Riley - finally found his backbone! I never hated Riley horribly, so I'm good with that. Now to worry about what Prof Walsh will do to find them ...

Author's Response: Hey, thanks again for going in depth with the chapter. I debated about the time lapse--initially I was only going to have them gone a week, but that seemed like not enough time to cement everyone's feelings in place. I hope it wasn't confusing.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 17

Ooh, what a twist! Did they give Spike Mohra blood? Or is it just something temporary? Is he truly human or still a vamp?? I need to know. *pouts* I think Spike would hate to be human full-time, but I'm sure whatever direction you'll take, I'm going to love it. You never disappoint. :) Loved that bit with Riley and I felt really bad when he died. I do think he acted like a hero by sacrificing himself to help Buffy and others get out. Can't wait to see the evil cliffhanger resolved!!

Author's Response: He's really human, he won't go back, but he has super strength which will totally be balm to being non-vampirey.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 17

"She didn't want the other occupants of the apartment to know she wasn't strong."

Pretty much sums Buffy up perfectly.

Enjoyed the chapter very much.

Riley's hero in the end. Seems fitting his -all-American wholesomeness won out in the end.

Maggie kills one of her own--maybe this will snap into an epiphany of just how eveil and obsessed she'd become. (Seeing the villain repent/redeemed--always a plus in a morality play like BTVS.)

The end is nigh...looking forward to seeing how you wrap this up. (But only if there will be still another story soon.!)

Author's Response: Glad you liked this chapter! Thanks so much for the comment.

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh Poor Riley! The scene of his death was simply devastating. I was totally in shock & then there were misty eyes. You are gooood. You made me like Riley all over again! I remember when he 1st came on the show I actually liked him before he turned into an immature annoying boyfriend. Oh well, at least they are finally free. Maybe not safe, but free from the torture. It was heartbreaking to see Buffy have to stay so strong.

Oh and how ironic, Xander broke up with Dav because he didn't want to put her in danger and wasn't sure how she'd fit in and here is Buffy giving her full blessing. You are an absolute fool Xander! He gave up the best relationship of his life. He should have fought for it. Can't wait to see how the group dynamic changes. And I hope that both he and Willow come to realization and catharsis. Positive, I love Buffy & Dav as friends. You created a character I've really started to care about.

And Spike! So interested to see what what will happen to him considering it wasn't actually a Mohra demon. Next chapter please! You got us on the edge of our seats.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the twists! I wanted Riley to be a good guy. I thought he basically was in the show. Thanks so much for your support of Dav.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2011 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter 17

At last .. the rescue. But now for the after effects of Ethan's "Demon Juice" on Spike.. just remember it was a temporary fix on Adam..
Hopefully Maggie will be arrested or ?
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Thanks so much for this comment!

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