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Reviewer: Mars Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2014 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for writing this, it was great! I loved the idea of a human and weak spike and the problems of inferiority. It's so real in relationships. I love them working through their problems and coming up with new solutions. It's beautiful.

I liked Dev. She'd be an awesome friend. But after the first couple of chapters I skimmed through most of her sub-plot. :-/ Side stories don't grasp my attention very long, especially when they're original characters. 

Lastly. Absolutely loved Harmony!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and for your honesty!

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2014 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 27

Wow, fantastic story. You're such a great writer. Would love to know how to find your original work...

Author's Response: Thank you! I wrote a story called, "One Lucky Night," under the name Grace Teague that you can find on Amazon.

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2012 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter 27

I just caught up with this story over the past fee days. Absolutely loved it! I love how you always make fhe characters your own, but at the same time they're so in-character. My heart broke a little for each character at one point during this fic, and I loved how you left off. Can't wait to see what you've got in store for us next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the comment! I love the characters on Buffy, obviously, and I'm glad you felt for everybody. I was trying not to make anyone an unambiguous villain. It means a lot to me that you felt I succeeded.

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2012 - 04:01 am Title: Chapter 27

Ooh, I did not expect that scene at the end! Harmony and Faith. Now that's a thought! :D Also, thanks for the scorching scene between Buffy and Spike. ;) Spike definitely knows how to go about satisfying the Slayer, vampire or not. This entire story was amazing and I enjoyed every bit of it!!! Hope we'll see more of your amazing writing soon. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 27

Spike, the sexual problem solver. Glad he got her back. Can't imagine a world where love isn't enough for those two. And Faith, Harmony, and Graham. :) Don't feel so bad for Faith getting tied up with the initiative if she's got fun threesome backup. :) Fun story. Thanks for sharing. Oh, btw... Do you think, Dav and Giles are gonna have a girl, or a boy?

Author's Response: I think Spike would be a creative genius when it came to sex, and that was my inspiration. Also, I think love is enough to carry you through the tough parts, as long as you have two devoted people, and those two definitely are. Faith is definitely having a lot of fun. I hope someone writes, "Harmony Kendall, in the Army Now!" It would be the dirtiest story of all time. Giles and Dav are having a girl, no question. They're going to name her Celeste. And that's about all I've got. Thanks so much for the comments!!!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2012 - 05:42 am Title: Chapter 27

That last bit had me cracking up laughing. A Faith,harmony/Graham relationship. Giggles.
Loved the way you ended it, it just seemed right.

Author's Response: I thought it was funny, too! Glad you liked the ending and thanks for commenting.

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