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Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2011 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 11

Thought I had posted a review.
Forrest.. a little weird sexually. And poor dumb Harmony.. someone's play toy and with the chip no less.
Good 'ole sex talk to take your mind off of being someone's guinea pig.. waiting for Spike to do something with the fire thing..
And Angel.. controlling as usual..
Poor Xander- left a good thing with Dav .Too bad I was in hopes it would last. He was always a lonely soul..
enjoyed..

Author's Response: Thanks for going back to post.

Reviewer: ashmandaLC Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

This has become one of those stories I wait and check for daily just in case you've added more :) you're doing a great job! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 12

Absolutely Love It!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 12

Like Buffy and Spike's getting to know you.
But Angel.. still worried about himeself and being Mr. Control Freak having Buffy followed.
Do like the Cecily story.. Joss is such a jerk..
Now to see what Spike's plan is .. but as things go its usually reactionary...
enjoyed

Author's Response: Glad you liked the Cecily story and the getting to know you. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 12

Love, love, LOVE the interaction between Buffy and Spike. Flows so well and leaves me both smiling and feeling sad. Also, I really love it when there are poems in a fic and fit well within the context, so I really enjoyed this. Hee... Buffy's poem about Spike's rock hard abs. :D Amazingness. Really looking forward to more!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means the world to me that it makes you smile while feeling a bit sad. That's what I strive for. Also glad you liked the poem. It made me laugh.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

Love your writing style, especially where Buffy enlightened Spike to what part of his anatomy his poem sounded like to Cecily. Liked your version of Spike and Cecily's history. Angel is way to self-involved and arrogant, hope the Scoobies can punch through the mojo that is keeping their tracking spell from going up in flames....btw how would the initiative do that? Were'nt they more into tech stuff? Or is Maggie Walsh really Maggie Witch! Look forward to more. (Anyone else having to post their reviews twice because they don't go through?)

Author's Response: They were more tech stuff, but in my version of the story I injected black magic into Adam's resurrection. That will be explained in the next chapter. Maggie Witch! I wish I'd thought of that.

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2011 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 12

So sad. Angel is well Angel. At that point he was not very grown up around Buffy but than he never really was. Sigh.
Wow, me thinks Giles has a crush on Xanders ex. He got so much more for her than the others. The only other gift that probaly had thought to it was Buffy's/
Spike is so sweet. Like licorice taffy (don't actually know, never have tried it.


Author's Response: Licorice taffy is sweet, spicy and savory, so very apt. Interesting read on Giles--you're the first person to pick up on that. Very perceptive! Thanks for the comment and for reading.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 07:45 am Title: Chapter 11

Xander and Dav?!?! Damn it. It's not fair that they don't get to have a thing. Despite trying to protect Dav, it really isn't up to him whether or not she gets involved in hell mouth craziness. Doesn't the "life's short" speech have extra meaning to these people? And I so had a feeling that Harmony was involved in the blond fondling. No way Maggie would let her precious Buffy get ravaged, at least not until she carried out many more experiments. Need to get to the bottom of this. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 11

Lol there's the Ringer love! I really liked the D/X breakup scene. Also consistent with the idea that all of their relationships were doomed. And now Angel's back, exciting! Plus so glad it wasn't a BSG rape scenario after all.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked that scene. I'm not a rape fan, I was just trying to inject some suspense into the story and put you in Spike's mindset. He feels really powerless.

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 10

Is Drusilla really the name of Caligula's sister?! Dr. Oliver is waay creepy. You did NOT do a GI Jane on Buffy!

Author's Response: Yes it is, yes he is, yes I did.

Reviewer: Mooseshug Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2011 - 05:04 am Title: Chapter 9

This is so much better than the plot of season 4! I always thought they killed Walsh off way too early. Her evil potential was Mears-level. Loved the Nazi and Indiana Jones refs. :) Remember when Spike ate a Nazi on Angel?

Author's Response: Thanks! I thought Walsh made an awesome villain, too. It was awesome when he ate a Nazi.

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Poor Dav! I absolutely love her. You have done such a good job making her a normal part of the story I almost feel she was really part if the show. I hope she fights for Xander and convinces him he is wrong. He's just feeling guilty. And wow, my stomach sank when I thought Buffy might have been molested. Poor Spike! I can only imagine the mental torture he went through. You have me hooked. Favorite story I'm reading!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Dav. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: VETTE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2011 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 11

The doctors and soldiers are beyond evil, hope that Buffy and Spike can be put together again. Wish that Angel and the Scoobies soon rescue Buffy and Spike. Too bad about Xander breaking up with Dav, quilt is not good on relationships. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 11

I wonder if Harmony is going to play the dumb card or if she is actually gum.
Ooh man they pissed off Spike by accident.

Author's Response: It's not good to piss Spike off. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2011 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 11

You know, when you mentioned the 'blonde' in the beginning, I actually suspected you were talking about Harmony, not Buffy. But I sure as hell didn't expect the twist of her liking Forrest and Graham. I love it when you surprise me! And another great thing is that Buffy still cracks jokes even in the situation she's in... that's so like her. I'm sad that Xander broke up with Dev, and hoping they'll patch it up somehow. Whatever direction you take this fic in, I know I'll be along for the awesome ride. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliment and the sweet review. I'm glad I could surprise you.

Reviewer: demona424 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2011 - 01:22 am Title: Chapter 10

Okay, so maybe I went a wee bit overboard on harshing on the Scoobie Gang, but you have to understand, you're pulling my heart strings here! That was like 2 days of torture! You made me care to much. Needless to say muy excellente story and I'm loving every second (even if you make me cringe).

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, even if you're starting to hate me.

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

Also, sorry for the typos! I meant "demonic Maggie Walsh". I like Riley still being a good guy. I think he was just screwed up and selfish on the show but not evil.

Author's Response: Your comments are kind of like the audience yelling back at a tense part in the movie when the girl is about to go into the haunted house alone. I love it!

Reviewer: Demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 10

It's official, Buffy has the worst friends ever. Here she is being tortured by the the demo if Maggie Walsh and they are of tra-la-la-ing with they're boy/girlfriends. Well, maybe not so much Willow.But still! How many times has she saved Xander's life and be can't even call to see if she's ok? It makes me tear up just thinking of it. I hope Spike can think of something and get her out of there soon because this torture! And I didn't mean to sound harsh in my last review, but you are just too good at making me care about these characters! Can you give any wee bit of hope?

Author's Response: Oh, hey now, she hasn't called them all weekend. That's only two days. They're not terrible friends, they've just got stuff going on. Besides, in the next chapter, they all realize what's going on and feel awful.

Reviewer: ragpants Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 10

The idea of Spike putting his "limitless ingenuity" to work is rather scary. Spike is endlessly inventive. It'll be interesting to see just what he comes up with.

And Spike bluffing Dr. Oliver! Clever indeed. His bluff plus Willow & Xander and friends making noise might be the thing that save Buffy from Dr. Walsh.


Author's Response: Glad you liked the bluff~ thanks for the commenting~

Reviewer: Leanne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2011 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 10

I HATE the initiative!! Your story makes me hate them even more. It was hard to read, but the story is so good I couldn't not read it.

Really hoping you don't make us suffer through much more before we see some light.

Author's Response: Don't want to give too much away. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: gopher101 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 10

Buffy is missing and Willow is thinking of (Willow couldn't help feeling proud that a hulking, footballish guy like that would find her attractive, but he was so not her type.) Man her attitude makes me so mad sometimes. Buffy could be dead and she is like oh la la a boy likes me.
Those cigs will come in handy later.
Maggie is one mean, saddistic mother dog.


Author's Response: Maggie is mean. In Willow's defense, she's trying to rationalize this guy's odd behavior. It's not like she isn't worried about Buffy. I didn't mean to write Willow as selfish here, just that she's writing off Riley's weirdness initially because of what Professor Walsh said. I guess I screwed up there. Anyway, thank you for the comment!

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm not too fond of Riley, but I really like that you're not making him into an evil guy. He's very in character and I wonder how long it takes before he stops blindly following orders and does the right thing instead. And Spike may have lied about the Council protecting Buffy, but we all know Scoobies will do everything in their power to find her. Btw, what a great touch on Buffy's hair being cut. It's so heartbreaking and in a way equally horrible as the physical pain they're causing her. I'm loving this complex story SO much!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I intend to keep Riley in character. I got the idea for having her hair cut from a scene in "Jane Eyre."

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10

Maggie is totally insane! Forrest is not that far behind her. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You betcha! Thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 10

Maggie Walsh should have consequences for kidnapping, torturing and imprisoning Buffy. Hope that help will be on the way soon.

Author's Response: Agreed. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2011 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 10

So glad the troops are beginning to call themselves into action on this one. And I love adding Eddie and Andrew to the crew. If only he met Eddie before Warren in cannon, what could have been. And Xander and Dav's parents are priceless. Walsh has to be stopped, poor girl should not be put through this. And I wonder if Spike and his ingenuity with fire and cigarettes may help him to more than just a smoke. Here's to hoping. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the compliments!

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