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Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 15

I'm glad they were both able to talk about what they were feeling, very nice!

Liked the chrysanthemum - Cruciamentum line. :D

Author's Response: Thanks ever so, adraztea!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 15

Something that Buffy on BtVS never did with Spike... is talk... and consider him more than a monster at that point..
Now for the appreciation and relationship time..
enjoyed

Author's Response: TY, Pam. Yeah, as she'd put it several times, words and Buffy are non-mixy. But I was determined for it to happen and keep happening until this story ends. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 15

This was quite lovely. Plus, the title has finally landed! This line is so Buffy:
"Actually, you need a first thought before you can have a second."

Author's Response: You flatter, Minx! Yeah, I try to work the title into my stories. I don't always succeed but I have a few times. I'm glad you like my Buffy-line. :)

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2012 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 15

Aww... love how you've turned Spike's dream in OOMM into reality. And they did the talking thing! Excellent! More please...

Author's Response: Thanks so much, All4Spike! I enjoyed turning this into reality and writing them finally talking!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2012 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter 14

Some fun adventures to connect point A to B. Can't wait to see what happens next. They are rarely more fun than when they've really angered the other. :) Update soon.

Author's Response: I can't agree with you more. Fun is to be had!!! Thanks for taking the time to read, enjoy, and review, Buffyrat!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2012 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

Fun chapter. Congratulations on your wins! So I take it the dream sequence isn't going to be a dream? I like that SOOOO much.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, me lady! I'm glad you like where I'm taking this!

Reviewer: allimagination Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2012 - 04:47 am Title: Chapter 14

so cool!! i read all 14 pages in one go! can't wait 4 the next chapter!! this story line is really cool and i cant wait to c what happens in the no longer a dream scene!!!!

Author's Response: *blushing* Welcome, allimagination! I'm so flattered you took all that time to read this is one go! I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint! Thanks so much! Big hugs!

Reviewer: iivyy13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2012 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 14

Yay it's not a dream, maybe heh. They're such a frustrating duo. Love how you're writing it though :-) Update soon please!

Author's Response: They are very frustrating, but that's part of why we love them! (I think we are all secretly masochist--or some of us not so secretly!) Big huggers!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 14

Back to "normal" .. it seems .. maybe not.
Waiting to see what Buffy has in mind.. Spike has already stated his point.. of a slayer that was always interfering in his unlife. Now for her retort..
Guess another tv episode won't work.. along with a slap in the face of what was -- not too long ago.. another "hot" whisper in the ear might not work this time though.

enjoyed..


Author's Response: Well, you're partly right. These two going back and forth, both in their own heads and with each other IS normal!! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review Pam!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 14

god, these two are so frustrating. hopefully it's not a dream this time, but they're just too stubborn to see what's right in front of them. i miss william, spike has really buried him now.

Author's Response: I wish you left your name so I could thank you properly--oh well, I'll thank you anyway! You're right, these two are way frustrating. But aren't all couples fighting what exists right in front of their eyes! Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 14

Love how Spike is still trying to reclaim his self-respect and freedom - even so far as to chuck Harmony out.

Author's Response: Yeah, this was sooooo missing from canon. I'm not too fond of whipped Spike, so I tend not to write him that way. TY, A4S, for taking the time to read, enjoy, and review!

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2012 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

Really liked seeing both sides of the day. Can't wait to see what happens next :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are still following my story, adraztea. More will be posted--NOW! Love to read whatcha think! Big huggers!

Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2011 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1

Such a good story and an awesome banner too :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Sara. I can take credit for the story. The banners were made by Capella and Edgehead. I love them too! Unfortunately, I've been having problems getting them on the later chapters.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2011 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 13

Glad to hear there will be more of this story. :)

Enjoyed Spike's POV.
Though I don't think Buffy will be pleased that Spike is sleeping with Harm again...

Author's Response: Thanks, Cordy! I missed writing Spike in this story, so I decided to go all out! Yeah, Buffy will be none to happy with Spike!

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2011 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter 13

Very interesting! It felt as if it just turned a bit darker... I look forward to reading more! :)

Oh, and I loved how you began this chapter: "Spike exhaled another steady stream of smoke. The bluish haze encircled his head in a mock halo before thinning out and disappearing into the cool air." The second sentence is a thing of pure beauty.

Author's Response: Slightly darker. I am anti-whipped Spike. I hate him begging for a crumb of affection, it drives me nuts! Most of my stories, I seem to write Spike with the fierceness of Season 2, but I add in him learning and accepting his feelings for Buffy. *blush* Many thanks for thinking this second sentence was a "thing of beauty."

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2011 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter 13

Spike is all angry and acting out. Not thinking Buffy's gonna be a huge fan of him acting out with Harmony. Wonder how he's really gonna feel when all is said and done. Update soon!

Author's Response: TY, Buffy! Yeah, Spike is being Spike. I will be updating Monday, love to read what you think!

Reviewer: iivyy13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2011 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter 13

I still have my nails! Love that you're giving Spike his personality back, everyone seemed to forget he was still a badass when he got chipped. Loved it can't wait to read more! Hope you had a wonderful Christmas :-) - Ivy

Author's Response: I'm glad! I do love giving Spike his personality and umph back! He is my fav character to write! I hope you have a wonderful Xmas as well! BBE

Reviewer: crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2011 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 13

I'm so glad you are continuing this story. I've loved it from the begining and can't wait to see where it goes. Spike starting to make plans, hmmm wonder where that'll lead. :-)

Author's Response: TY, Crazylife! I'm so glad you have been enjoying my story! Love to read what you think of the next chapter!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2011 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 13

Glad you are continuing the story..
And Spike.. still trying to tbe the Big Bad..
But poor substitue Harmony.. just a little better than a hand-job..
enjoyed

Author's Response: TY, Pam! Yeah, Harmony is a very poor substitue! I'm glad you are still enjoying!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/25/2011 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 12

Mmmh Buffy is still struggling with her feelings / what she wants... but at last she went to see him.
Cute when she asked Spike to stay. I guess he liked it. :D
And Merry Christmas!

Author's Response: It's classic Buffy to still be struggling with her emotions. But hey, you have to give her credit she got as far as she did! Merry Christmas to you Cordy!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

Yeah, those two really have a hard time with the words, and using them to convey what they 'really' mean. Perhaps Snoopy can perform another miracle and bring them to a common place. Force them to suss out a few things when they're in the same room. :) Lovely. Merry Christmas to you, too! Looking forward to next Monday. :)

Author's Response: As Buffy would say, "words and she are unmixy." As for Snoopy, he's good, but he's not THAT good! Have a wonderful Christmas!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 11

Sometimes I guess it just works out. Gotta wonder what is going through Spike's head right now, what he remembers and what he's gonna think of Buffy. And it is always good to know when both the man and the demon are in love with Buffy, as though we'd expect much less. :)

Author's Response: I think Spike, both man and demon, were in love with Buffy much, much earlier than the dream. Lust and awe came earlier, like the first time he saw her dancing, but I feel the feelings were there sooner than Season 5.

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 12

That last line left me smiling as well :)

Happy holidays!

Author's Response: Happy Holidays to you as well. Who can resist The Great Pumpkin?

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

Feel Spike was upset Buffy didn't come earlier.. Course-hurt feelings with Spike produces the insults and confrontations..
Yet, ended well .. with Peanuts and soon to come more agreeable conversation.
enjoyed..
( your beddy-bye ? )

Author's Response: Neither of them were ready any sooner than Buffy came. Unfortunately, the Peanuts Gang can't solve every frown. Thanks for the correction on beddy-bye, I fixed it! Thanks!

Reviewer: Ivy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading the whole thing over the last week, and was literally biting my nails off waiting for this update! Love what you've done with it, especially the supportive scoobies, so much better than judgemental scoobies. Ooh and primal Spike, that's always hot. I wanna see how Buffy tells Spike she likes him :) Can't wait until your next update!

Author's Response: Welcome Ivy! I'm so flattered you've been enjoying this story. Hopefully you still have some nails left LOL! My next update is on Monday, love to hear whatcha think!

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