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Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2011 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 12

Love Buffy's tentative approach - she's still not sure about her feelings and is understandably cautious - and of course Spike is being defensive. Wonderful characterisation.

Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike! Even though Buffy seemed to do well with William and the demon, this is still Spike. The whole of these two parts.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2011 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 11

So Willow noticed how Spike's demon reacts towards Buffy. Buffy did too, huh?
And how nice of Toth to come to Buffy, saving her to go to get him. (*nods* - I remember the episode.)
And it seems to have worked. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I put in that info in the Author's Notes because I didn't want people to think I was taking the easy way out. With their little display, how could one NOT see their interaction. Well, Xander didn't, but despite what Caleb thought, I don't think he saw very much!

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 11

Thank you for the update! I liked how you described Spike's reaction when both of his parts were reunited. Just leaving really seems like a thing he would do, in my opinion. He must be so confused!
I'm already looking forward to next Monday. :)


Author's Response: I'm glad you agree adraztea. I didn't feel he was going to be all "thank you, thank yous." Now, thank YOU for your review!

Reviewer: isha_rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 11

Simply wonderful. Was that chapter extra long? It felt marvellously lengthy! I'm so excited to see Spike's reaction to the experience of being halved. I'm sure he'll be embarrassed to have been William in front of the Slayer. Oh, and I shall miss William very much so, although Spike is a good consolation. At least Willow seems open to the idea of Buffy having feelings for Spike. I'm a big fan of supportive Scoobies!

Loving this, and already desperate for more.

Author's Response: Thank you, isha_rose! Yes, this chapter was longish. I'm glad you liked! Yes, William was very fun to write, but to be honest, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE writing Spike. He is my favorite character to write! He just oozes sarcasm, and sexyness...

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 11

Okay, Operation Re-Vamp was perfect. So glad to see this story. It's so much fun and everyone's very in character. Lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks minx! Your kind words really make me smile :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 11

Loved Xander's wish... LOL could use a little of that myself.
Thought for a second .. convenient about Toth glad you included info about BtVS in your comments.
Pavlov's dog has shown up in many-a- verse such as a Rolling Stone's song..
Strange that Spike ran away.. more like the demon or maybe like an embarrased William.. Run Buffy and catch him please..
enjoying..

Author's Response: Couldn't we all! Yeah, Pavlov's dog is too good to pass up when you're talking about people's reactions. I'm glad you are enjoying. Thanks for taking the time to let me know!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2011 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 11

Wonderful! I love Willow's observiness with Buffy & William & DemonSpike. She wasn't nearly as perceptive to Buffy's needs and feelings at this time on the show. Now then... How is Spike going to react?

Author's Response: TY All4Spike! Willow was observant at times, well, before she became so self-centered in Season 6. I felt there needed to be a catalyist to help Buffy, so there you have it.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2011 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 10

Well, we may not be free and clear yet, but it would seem that bringing the demon in for a good meal can't be a total bad thing. And I want to see what happens when the two meet. Could lead to an interesting buddy comedy if they can't figure out how to mush them back together. :) Update soon.

Author's Response: I will be updating soon, BuffyRat, actually tomorrow! I would love to read what you think of the newest chapter. True, they aren't in the clear just yet, but it's close!

Reviewer: loren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2011 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter 10

Good pace, and I appreciate the update!

Author's Response: TY, loren. No, I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh clever way to attract Spike with the blood. Not so clever to have to carry Spike. *gg*
Looking forward to more, as always.

Author's Response: Yeah, blood=enticing vampire. But, as we see often, Buffy doesn't always think everything through. Thanks cordy for continuing to read, enjoy, and review my story.

Reviewer: isha_rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 10

Wonderful, again. I really am enjoying this hugely. I love the soley demon Spike, he is surprisingly tender and that flash of betrayal in his eyes was very moving. Poor Buffy. This was lovely- can't wait for next Monday!

Author's Response: *blush* I appreciate your kind words, isha_rose. More will be coming Monday, I hope you enjoy this as well.

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 10

Seeing this update made me happy! I think you just saved my Monday. :)
I like how Buffy's worries about Spike - both versions of him. Nice way of luring the demon out too.
Looking forward having my next Monday made better as well! :)


Author's Response: I'm glad to make you happy, adraztea! Thanks a big feat to save your Monday, but I'll take it! Hope to save your next Monday as well! Buffy is slowly starting to realize Spike is both William and the demon, but it's still going to take sometime. See you Monday!

Author's Response: Not 'thanks a big feat' I meant 'that's a big feat' whoops!

Reviewer: minx delovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 10

Glad to see an update! I genuinely enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, minx! More will be coming on Monday!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aw, poor DemonSpike. He must feel so betrayed. Now to get the two Spike's reunited and see how the experience has affected him...

Author's Response: Thank you, All4Spike for taking time to read and review my story. Yeah, Spike's demon had a fast one pulled on him. But in Buffy's defense, time was running short.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2011 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

Poor Demon Spike .. lured by "the" woman and her blood..
So sleeping is not of the good. Another problem it seems. And not much time left?
enjoying..


Author's Response: Thanks Pam. With time being of the essence, they have to get creative and quick. I'm glad you're enjoying. More tomorrow!

Reviewer: adraztea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 9

Just spent my entire lunch break reading this story. Really like it so far! Looking forward to see where you take it. :)

Author's Response: I'm so flattered, but I hope you didn't go hungry! I'm so glad you are really liking the trip I'm taking you on. More will be coming soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter 9

Poor William. Hope they can get the demon a full stomach so this all can continue. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, Buffyrat for reading and reviewing all these chapters! Yes, William is hurting. I will updating on Monday!!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 7

So cool that even feral Spike is hunting cats, not people, even if he's not very good at it. Some part of even Demon him isn't completely bad. And really, Riley could push anyone to attack. :)

Author's Response: No, he's not very good at hunting the four legged blood bags. On his demon not being completely bad, well, that's not exactly true. Just stay tune and you'll see what I mean

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 09:28 am Title: Chapter 6

Love angry William, and how Buffy is kind of torn to turn him back. Nice touch.

Author's Response: I wanted William to have some sort of backbone. I never believed it was only the demon that gave him strength, I felt his human side did as well.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 09:11 am Title: Chapter 4

And finally another piece clinks into place. Love all the awkward with William and modern conveniences. Zippers. :) And the fact that they already all sort of want each other. Awesome.

Author's Response: Yes, there's some UST there, although slightly. I'm glad you liked the zipper part. I had so much fun writing that chapter, especially the zipper fiasco!

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 06:29 am Title: Chapter 9

More! If you posted every day, it still wouldn't be enough! ;)

I love this story

Author's Response: I would love to post everyday, alas RL has to be dealt with so it's only once a week! I'm so flattered you're loving this story. More will be coming on Monday!

Reviewer: SeaPea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter 9

Still hanging on to every word....

Author's Response: Thanks SeaPea for reading, enjoying and reviewing!

Reviewer: isha_rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 9

I must tell you how much I am enjoying your story! The added detail is wonderful, and I have a particular fondness for your edifying footnotes. There's nothing like a well-researched and engaging story.

Your character development is spot on. It's lovely seeing this softer side to Buffy. Willow's excitement over her marine worms comparison was also very endearing and true to form.

A wonderful and enjoyable fic. Thanks

Author's Response: Welcome, isha_rose to my world of fandom! I'm glad you like the footnotes. I've come to realize that not everyone understands my references due to being a different age, living in a different part of the world, or they don't have the same twisted mind as me! So I felt it was important to show where I obtained my knowledge. (Well, most of it was floating around my head, but it had to come from somewhere. Plus, in my head is a scary place, I wouldn't want to expose people to it!) Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. I would love to hear from you again. ;)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2011 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 9

They indeed found the why - now they just have to save the day eh William and Spike. :)

Author's Response: Yes, we are getting down to the last 10 minutes of the episode so they have to save the day soon!!!

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2011 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 9

This is so imaginative--I love the idea that he's dehydrated. This is maybe my favorite story of yours so far. The pacing is very good and it's so well-researched in regard to the series. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I blush, Minx. To have such an amazing writer say this, well, I'm speechless. All I can say is thank you.

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