[Report This]Date: 11/28/2011 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter 9
I like your logic. Off to find a demon!
Author's Response: Thanks All4Spike. I was a little wary readers wouldn't understand this choice. At least I know one person does! And yes, off to find a demon!
[Report This]Date: 11/20/2011 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Uh-huh.. seems being split from Spike is getting to William. It's time the Scoobies solve this - or William will get worse.
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: Thanks cordy! Don't worry, the Scoobies will save the day, they always do!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2011 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 8
Lovely to see Buffy sympathetic to William. More please...
Author's Response: Yes, Buffy is really concerned for William. I love writing her softer side. More will be coming soon! Thanks for your review All4Spike
[Report This]Date: 11/15/2011 - 03:52 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw, man, there aren't any more chapters. I was enthralled by this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Enthralled? Wow, that really makes me smile! Don't worry, more chapters will be coming very soon! I hope you enjoy them as well.
[Report This]Date: 11/15/2011 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Just started reading this story, and I just had to let you know how entertaining it. William in year 2000 is a kick.
Author's Response: Welcome to my little world, nea! I really appreciate your review. Yeah, I had big fun writing William!
[Report This]Date: 11/13/2011 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bye bye Riley... he shouldn't have shot Spike.
And Buffy got an important clue about what happened to Spike.
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: No, Riley should've kept his arrows to himself, the bastard! I appreciate your view, cordy! Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/11/2011 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Such a good story! So looking forward to the next chap!
Author's Response: I appreciate your review, Victoria2. The next chapter will be out soon
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
I thought this was a great chapter. Loved Buffy and feral demon Spike.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, SeaPea.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
I can't speak for everyone, but I'm really enjoying this story. I was wondering about the chip, I didn't know if both Spike and William would have one or only one or neither. I really did not like Riley's interruption (he has horrible timing); however, it was needed just to end their relationship.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I appreciate your review and enjoyment of my story, Anna. Well, you know Spike has it. Now if William does, only time will tell. Yeah, Riley has poor timing, but it brought Buffy's feelings for Riley and Spike to the forefront.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, the Primal Attraction between the two.. and in his mind-Buffy is his.. But now two of him.
Poor Riley-befuddled by her behavior which should slap him in the face.. not yours..
enjoyed..
Author's Response: Welcome Pam!! Yes, the PSA (primal sinister attraction) is heavy between the two. For a fraction of a second, I do feel bad for Riley, but then it fades quickly!
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 - 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
Love Protective!Demon!Spike and that Buffy has finally dumped Oblivious!Riley - and at last Buffy gets a clue!
Author's Response: TY, All4Spike! I really enjoyed writing protective, demon-Spike. Yeah, it was about time Buffy got a clue.
[Report This]Date: 11/10/2011 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
ENjoyed this chapter. I know it's weird but I'm kind of worried about Toth showing up.
Author's Response: Thanks, Minx. No, it's not weird at all. Toth still has to be dealt with.
[Report This]Date: 11/06/2011 - 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 6
The Alice in Wonderland remarks fit :)
William is getting to Buffy - even if she doesn't want to confess it to herself.
Enjoyed the update.
Author's Response: Yes, William is wiggling his way in. I'm glad you enjoyed my Alice in Wonderland comparisons. Thanks for leaving a review.
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2011 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well thank goodness for Anya's frankness, or poor William would never ave found out what was going on! Next comes the revelation that there's a separate VampSpike out there...
Author's Response: Yeah, I always loved Anya! I don't write her often, but when I do, it makes me all sorts of happy. The gang might find out about another side of William's coin IE; Spike, but it won't be as simple as that. Thanks for your review and continuing to enjoy my story, All4Spike!
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2011 - 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
A lovely Halloween treat, an update! Great chapter, I'm happy to see Buffy and William getting some-what close. Can't imagine what William's feeling right now. I can't wait for Buffy to run into Spike!
Author's Response: Thanks Anna! A Halloween treat and you didn't even need to dress up! If you did, that's a bonus!!! William is all sorts of confused! Unfortunately, it doesn't stop there.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2011 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Heh :) I would have laughed too when I would have seen the double lens cleaning. *gg* William seems like a watcher.
And leave it to Anya to put the facts together in one sentence.
Looking forward to William's reaction.
Author's Response: Thanks Cordy. It was a little visual detail I needed to add to stress the Watcherness of William, since I didn't go into much detail about the suit William was wearing. I've always loved Anya. Her bluntness was always refreshing if not needed!
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2011 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
What a thing to say! Wonder if William is going to freak?? Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, photo! You'll see William's reaction in the next chapter I assure you. I'm so glad you liked and more will be coming soon!
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2011 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! Wonder how long it will take them to realize their are two of them. It didn't take long for them to find out they were both Xander in the Replacement. Anyways, I imagine Giles might take some precautions with William at night, such as tying him up or something. And if Buffy goes patroling at night and runs into Spike, then they've to deduct that their are two of them.
Author's Response: Thanks Anna! So you have this all figured out, huh? I guess I don't need to finish this story then. LOL!!! Don't worry I will. I have far more in store for our characters don't you worry.
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2011 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
I do love your William! Something tells me the scoobies are dense enough to be unable to figure it out until they have incontrovertible evidence of 'William' being with a witness in Giles' flat at the same time as 'Spike' is out fighting Buffy in the cemetery...
Author's Response: Thanks, All4Spike! You saying you love my William really means a lot to me. Well, in the Scoobs defense, it seems more reasonable that there's human-William during the day and a vamp-Spike at night. Look at the alternative, being two of them. That seems to me more far fetched! More will be coming soon. I hope you'll enjoy it as well
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2011 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved the update! Looks like Buffy met Spike's demon! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks photo! Yuppers, Buffy met Spike's demon. More will be coming early this week!
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2011 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 4
Mmmh pamper Buffy day. That was a good start - but ended surprisingly for Buffy with the encounter with Spike. Scared her a bit. Because of Spike's "kiss"?
But it seems she noticed somethings else entirely - Spike being human.
Looking forward for their reactions :D
Author's Response: Yeah, Buffy would've never guessed while having a "me day" that she would have a run in with Spike and his tantalizing tongue! More will be coming early this week!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2011 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice to see Buffy and Spike interact. Buffy must be so confused now. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yup, Buffy is beyond confused! Spike enjoying the sunbathing, suckling vampires...The next chapter will be up early next week. I hope you'll enjoy also!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2011 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
I had been wondering what VampSpike was up to :-) NOW Buffy has to realise what's happened - because Giles will have discovered William is human and say William has been there all day. Can't wait for the penny to drop......
Author's Response: Trust me on this one, it will be far more than a penny dropping, All4Spike! Thanks for your review, and more will be coming early next week!
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2011 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really like the first line about washing away old book smell and confusion!
Author's Response: Thanks Minx! I felt it was very fitting!
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2011 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love it so far - fun to read. Hope you'll continue to update even if I may be late reading.
Author's Response: No worries about late in reading, Cordy. Just your desire and saying you'll be waiting till I post makes me happy!!!! Will be posting soon!
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