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Reviewer: Donna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/20/2012 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

Great Story! Please update new chapter! :)

Author's Response: I plan to x I'll get started on it soon x

Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2012 - 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

Is there going to be a chapter 3? Loving the story so far XD

Author's Response: I plan to I've been really busy with work, hopefully on by the end of the month :) xxx

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2011 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

Enjoyed! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad your enjoying it :) x

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2011 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

So they aren't ghosts and limited to W&H, that sounds like a good thing.
~ Till next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) x No they aren't ghosts.. it's one of the things that I hated about Angel in Season 5. I'm glad you are enjoying it :) x

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2011 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

lol it's just like Spike to steal from Angel! Enjoying the story so far, thank you for posting!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :D I'm glad your enjoying the story so far :D x I no haha that's what I always liked about him :D x

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2011 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter 2:- The Reunion

A good chapter for Buffy and Spike. Things are looking really good for them at the moment. There's so many possibilities for what could happen. How will Giles react? Will Buffy and Spike work with Angels team? Anyway, I feel that I will enjoy this. I just hope nothing bad happens to Harmonx. I have a soft spot for her. She was often treated badly, and she has stopped killing without a soul or a chip. Some credit for that could be nice.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :D x I am so excited about this story x I agree there are loads of different things that could happen x I love Harmony too x she makes me laugh :D x I will treat her well :D I have a plan for her, And i'm not going to make her evil (as such) as I think that she has so much potential to be a greater character, than the show made her out to be.. also if there is anything else you would like to see let me know xx also if you would like to beta this story, please let me know as soon as :D xx Thanks again xx <3 Liz <3

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Are you going to give us more of this soon?? Are they ghosty or are they solid and can they maim Angelass?

Author's Response: You won't have to wait long :) i'm hopefully putting more up today xD and I'm not going to tell you, you'll have to read to see what happens :) x

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

I like the twist, sounds interesting. Looking forward to find out how it will go.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm uploading more today :) x

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

You have me hooked already! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you the great review x i'm glad that you are liking it :) x

Reviewer: zachamy4444 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Wow, what happens next - can't wait!!

Author's Response: Thank You :) I'm hoping to get more up today :D x

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

that is down right evil to leave it at that.........

Author's Response: Haha... Sorry hun :P I will be continuing it. Just thought that I would leave at that to see what everyone thought. xx

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

It's a concept I find fascinating, Buffy not leaving Spike behind to burn in the Hellmouth alone, but I'm afraid I find it very difficult to follow the dialogue when there is no punctuation denoting dialogue and the paragraphs aren't formed in a conventional manner. I'm sorry, but this seems a very lazy way of writing.

Also it looks as if you've used pointy brackets to enclose portions of text and as pointy brackets are used to insert HTML tags, the website assumes that's what you're doing and the text between your brackets vanishes. You might want to change to twirly brackets instead {}

I'll pop in to have a look at the next chapter, but I'm afraid if the dialogue isn't sorted out, I won't be continuing.

Author's Response: I'm sorry about that.. I'm hoping to fix it today.. If i'm honest I could do with a beta to check it for me. I orginally structured in paragraphs but I don't know why it hasn't worked. I'm hoping to post the next bit tonight. Thanks for the review. If there's anymore pointers you could give me that would be helpful thanks x

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Hey Liz,
I really think it's an interesting idea to See how Season 5 of Angel would have turned out with an ensouled Spike. I always love having Buffy thrown in the mix of course. But I also gotta say that for me personally, it's kinda irritating if the speech is written in a dialogue-form. I don't know about everyone else but I'd like it If you would try to integrate the speech into the text. I will definetly check out the next chapters to see where you are going.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I will hopefully sending the next piece tonight. I will be changing it into text form. I could do with a beta to look through it before I post it and thank you for what you have said. xx

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Interesting banner, I can see that one of the heads is Spike and then Buffy must be another one, but who are the other too? I always enjoy a story where Spike belives that Buffy loves him. Them returning together gives the story a good potential. I read what you wrote about yourself, so I'm guessing Spike won't have his soul now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you will have to read the next bit of the story to see who's in the rest of the banner. I plan on reveling everyone in the banner as i go along so you will find out eventually. xx

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