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Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2011 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Are you going to give us more of this soon?? Are they ghosty or are they solid and can they maim Angelass?

Author's Response: You won't have to wait long :) i'm hopefully putting more up today xD and I'm not going to tell you, you'll have to read to see what happens :) x

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2011 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

I like the twist, sounds interesting. Looking forward to find out how it will go.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm uploading more today :) x

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2011 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

You have me hooked already! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you the great review x i'm glad that you are liking it :) x

Reviewer: zachamy4444 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2011 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Wow, what happens next - can't wait!!

Author's Response: Thank You :) I'm hoping to get more up today :D x

Reviewer: nikki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2011 - 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

that is down right evil to leave it at that.........

Author's Response: Haha... Sorry hun :P I will be continuing it. Just thought that I would leave at that to see what everyone thought. xx

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

It's a concept I find fascinating, Buffy not leaving Spike behind to burn in the Hellmouth alone, but I'm afraid I find it very difficult to follow the dialogue when there is no punctuation denoting dialogue and the paragraphs aren't formed in a conventional manner. I'm sorry, but this seems a very lazy way of writing.

Also it looks as if you've used pointy brackets to enclose portions of text and as pointy brackets are used to insert HTML tags, the website assumes that's what you're doing and the text between your brackets vanishes. You might want to change to twirly brackets instead {}

I'll pop in to have a look at the next chapter, but I'm afraid if the dialogue isn't sorted out, I won't be continuing.

Author's Response: I'm sorry about that.. I'm hoping to fix it today.. If i'm honest I could do with a beta to check it for me. I orginally structured in paragraphs but I don't know why it hasn't worked. I'm hoping to post the next bit tonight. Thanks for the review. If there's anymore pointers you could give me that would be helpful thanks x

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Hey Liz,
I really think it's an interesting idea to See how Season 5 of Angel would have turned out with an ensouled Spike. I always love having Buffy thrown in the mix of course. But I also gotta say that for me personally, it's kinda irritating if the speech is written in a dialogue-form. I don't know about everyone else but I'd like it If you would try to integrate the speech into the text. I will definetly check out the next chapters to see where you are going.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I will hopefully sending the next piece tonight. I will be changing it into text form. I could do with a beta to look through it before I post it and thank you for what you have said. xx

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2011 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1: The End... Or is it?

Interesting banner, I can see that one of the heads is Spike and then Buffy must be another one, but who are the other too? I always enjoy a story where Spike belives that Buffy loves him. Them returning together gives the story a good potential. I read what you wrote about yourself, so I'm guessing Spike won't have his soul now.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, you will have to read the next bit of the story to see who's in the rest of the banner. I plan on reveling everyone in the banner as i go along so you will find out eventually. xx

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