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Date: 08/05/2012 - 10:33 pm Title: Miracles:

*phew* All caught up and this last chapter ended better - more hopeful

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Date: 08/05/2012 - 10:29 pm Title: Undertaking

I'm glad there is a chapter left to read - evil cliffhanger.

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Date: 08/05/2012 - 10:16 pm Title: Closer

Uh-huh... Buffy is going to drown like in her dream? I hope she has a plan. She came back before, being drowned.

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Date: 08/05/2012 - 10:08 pm Title: Arrangements:

Spike is awake? At last one good thing. :)

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Date: 08/05/2012 - 10:03 pm Title: Preparations:

Sadly it's very logical - someone has to die for a vampire being borne. Doesn't sound good....

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Date: 08/05/2012 - 08:35 pm Title: Looming:

So Spike is still not better - and something is about to come. Not a good combination.

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Date: 07/23/2012 - 11:25 pm Title: Undertaking

Buffy cant die.....finally telling spikeshe loves him....dander better keep his promise to keep spike involved in his daughters life though I think he should have her I know hes a vampire but stiil itzhis daughter.....

more soon plz

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Date: 06/28/2012 - 10:00 pm Title: Transparent:

Mmmh good question from Anya.

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Date: 06/28/2012 - 09:54 pm Title: Misdirection:

Yeah they have won - but what prize... (Willow)

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Date: 06/28/2012 - 09:34 pm Title: Need:

Loved the spuffyness with the baby being calmed by Spike.

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Date: 06/25/2012 - 02:52 am Title: Transparent:

I love Anya's perceptions I can only hope she can help Xander.

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Date: 06/18/2012 - 12:42 pm Title: Misdirection:

Oh, loved this. Can´t wait for more. Please update soon.

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Date: 06/17/2012 - 04:12 pm Title: Misdirection:

Love seein this bein updated great story

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Date: 05/22/2012 - 10:32 pm Title: Visiting:

Oh clever of Cordy, stopping Angel to hit Spike.

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Date: 05/22/2012 - 10:27 pm Title: Relentless:

I should have guessed that Angel would come by when he got the news...

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Date: 05/09/2012 - 10:14 pm Title: Waiting:

Mmmh I wonder what Angel will confess (being a dad)...

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Date: 05/09/2012 - 10:05 pm Title: Burning:

*phew* They won for now.

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Date: 05/09/2012 - 10:00 pm Title: Developments:

Uh-huh - the prophecy doesn't sound good.

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Date: 05/09/2012 - 09:55 pm Title: Distracted:

Ouch.. seems it would be better if Buffy wouldn't patrol alone. Good Spike was there.

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Date: 04/28/2012 - 11:32 pm Title: Waiting:

I like your story a lot, can't wait to read about Angel finding out about Buffys pregnancy. Please do continue.

Reviewer: Acajou Amarth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/17/2012 - 09:13 pm Title: Developments:

Ooh! What's up with Buffy now?

And I'm guessing this means Spuffy will be parents to one of the children of the dead and Angel and someone else parents of the other. Hm... Don't like Angel. But whatever. :P

Cute little baby girl on her way... :) I loved Buffy's happiness about that and her imagining what she'd be like.

One thing about this story is - in my opinion - wasted potential and that is the Season 6 setting. I've already told you how much I love the angst and how this story was special because it originates from there, but for me, it feels like the angstiness between Buffy and Spike was resolved way too quickly. Sure, she's not exactly in love with him, but she's a lot more accepting of him and his involvement in this pregnancy than I think realistic. So, it's getting a bit too fluffy for me in that respect.

Doesn't mean I'll stop reading. This is a great story and I always love it when there's an update. Thank you! :)

Author's Response: I promise all is not resolved with them yet, and it won't stay fluffy, so I'm glad you plan to hang in there.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 11:17 pm Title: Mending:

I just caught up with your story; I'm liking it so far. Looking forward to what you'll have in mind with it.

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Date: 03/29/2012 - 12:30 am Title: Mending:

Great update! :)

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Date: 03/28/2012 - 01:42 pm Title: Mending:

Oooh! Exciting! Prophecy, oh prophecy, Buffy always has to be a chosen one... :P I'm glad Xander's trying, even though I still don't like him (but that's because where Spike is concerned, he always acts like a meany - for lack of a better word).

Giles... Hm... I hope they won't try to take away Buffy's kid(s) just because he thinks it/they might be controlling her...

Looking forward to an update! Thank you for this one! :)

Reviewer: Acajou Amarth Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/04/2012 - 08:47 pm Title: Judgement:

First things first: I'm not normally one to read pregnancy stories. Usually, the mere hint of it makes me want to run in the opposite direction.

Add to my initial dislike the fact that VAMPIRES ARE STERIL WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GET THAT, I haven't really read the Spuffy version much.

You sort of surprised me with it and strangely enough, I stuck with it. I think the thing I like most about your version of the tale is the setting. There are plenty of Spuffy pregnancy stories out and about set pretty much anywhere where Buffy and Spike either don't know each other at all or are already really happy together in strange parallel universes or post-'Chosen' utopiae.

You, however, chose the one time I love the most, where Buffy is vulnerable and her relationship with Spike is built on mutual abuse. Call me a sucker for angst, but the show is the most interesting then.

Maybe that's the reason I kept reading, maybe it's also due to the fact that I love the way you made Buffy accuse Spike of putting something unnatural in her and his reaction to finding out he can be a father if Buffy keeps the baby.

This last chapter only proves that I was right to not give up on the story. The Scoobies were perfectly in character and you feel as lost as Buffy does, as alone in her situation when they start judging.

The sentence that blew me away - the epiphany I never managed to have before about their relationship - was that Spike would never look at her with disgust and disappointment, only with love.

Thank you for your story. I eagerly await a new update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm also glad that you liked the setting because that's pretty much the reason I wrote it. I'm a sucker for season 6 angst and I felt like it was the perfect time to write this piece.

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