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Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2015 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's so sad reading about them in this Joan&Randy state - knowing what their reality was back before the spell and what that reality future would bring them.

Author's Response: It's easy to see the angst coming, isn't it? Knowing them as we do...

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2014 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter 1

This is such a lovely story, so I have reread it several times. whenever I read the part when they shall enter the crypt I think: what if Harmony had been there, that would be so awkward.

Author's Response: Thank you. And, yes, it certainly would have, wouldn't it? LOL

Reviewer: aly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2012 - 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Yep i did, see my later review. :) It didnt bother me one bit, it was a very understandable mistake, but i just had to mention it. I am annoying that way.... :p

Author's Response: Not a problem. I'd rather know about it and get a chance to fix it, then leave it lying around out there. :)

Reviewer: aly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2012 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Fun!
But halfway the chapter you start calling Joan buffy.... At least twice (in the crypt)

Author's Response: Gah! Thanks for the catch! I fixed it on here, but will have to check my main document to see if it went up everywhere like that. I know my beta caught a couple "Buffy"s somewhere in the story, but maybe we missed these. Hope you enjoy the rest of it.

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/17/2012 - 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

I've read this before but I really like it. A Randy and Joan story makes it possible to be all nice and domestic but still in character.

Author's Response: I'm glad it holds up for you the second time around. Being Randy and Joan does give them a chance for some angst-free time together, doesn't it?

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