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Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 - 10:09 am Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

Omg, yes you are a freakin' tease!

It was enough to hold me over until the next chapter though...if you update by the end of the day. :P

It was a great chapter, thanks for the update!

I love this story! Keep it up!

This story, for me, is seriously competing with Mr. Williams, which is my favorite teacher/student fic....that's a compliment, so take it as that please. A Girl Next Door is closely my new favorite ever :)

Author's Response: Tehehe I do love being a tease :) I'm glad it can hold you over though, because sadly I'm going to post tomorrow :( but not to fear! It will come soon enough! I'm so glad you love this story!! I get so giddy reading all your comments :) I've never heard of that fic but I will have to check that out now!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 - 08:40 am Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

Have still been reading and enjoying only not reviewing - very bad I know. You've made my morning better by posting. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much for reviewing now! The present is always the best time ;) I will post as soon as I can

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

Hot wonton blond seventeen year old is the perfect distraction for your unborn child and crazy wife... Know he wants to forget, but I kind of hoped they'd talk a bit more. Work on things other than there crazy hormones... though I know the night isn't over, yet. And they only have more and more bugs to work through. Update soon!

Author's Response: Well, he really needs the distraction right now and talking more probably wouldn't help at the moment. I completely understand though. And you're right, the night isn't over so perhaps they will actually "talk" this time. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 - 05:22 am Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

I liked their talk and then of course the hottness. Can't wait for more

Author's Response: Good, I'm so glad you liked it! I will post as soon as I can!

Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2012 - 02:54 am Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

Wonderful chapter. I love the awkward pause inside the house, the 'What are we?', 'Should we?', 'How much am I willing to risk?' 'How much am I going to be hurt?' questions.

This really elements to the story.

Also Yes you little tease cutting us off in the smutty goodness

You are doing a fantastic job with the story and I am very much enjoying the 'ride' heehee

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I also love that awkward moment. Realistically, they need those awkward moments to be able to move on. I may have cut off the smut, but that doesn't mean it won't continue ;) I guess we'll have to see!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2012 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 9: Not a School Night

YES! ABREAK FOR THEM TO FEEL HAPPY AND CONNECTED! AND YUMMY SMUT FOR ALL! YAY!!

Author's Response: lol I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I'm trying to get them to a place where they aren't constantly questioning what they do :) More sexy fun to come!

Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2012 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter 8: Reason

Oh you are evil! Leaving us hanging like that.... I love it. You wicked wicked woman

Author's Response: Tehehe I'm doing all I can to keep you all reading, and if that means more suspense, then MORE SUSPENSE! lol, but seriously the next chapter (which I'm almost finished with) is going to make up for it, promise. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reason

Pretty wise for a high school student, just have to see if she can deliver. How do they save him... Update soon!

Author's Response: Yes, I think this Buffy is wise beyond her years but is still immature to an extent. All will end well though! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reason

i really like the dialog. and the pacing is very good. the stress is killing me!

Author's Response: The stress of waiting or the stress of the characters is killing you? I would hate for their stress to hurt the readers :( Well, let me know. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reason

Well it was good to see what Buffy was thinking and feeling. I hope the next chapter is about their night together.

Author's Response: Yes it most definitely is!!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2012 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 8: Reason

You little tease! It's Easter and you pull a prank like this?

I demand smut for next chapter. ;)

I was holding my breath when Buffy was talking to Willow; I thought she was going to tell her about Spike! I don't trust Willow to not blab.

I'm looking forward to their night together. Thank you so much for the fast updates!! :D

Have I mentioned how much I love this fic?!

Author's Response: Lol, I felt the need to add Buffy's pov so I apologize for teasing ;) As for Willow, she'll find out in a much more... graphic way. No spoilers here! But I shall take your demand into serious consideration. You have mentioned it once or twice, but please keep it coming! I need the positive reinforcement :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: bikey88chic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Alone. In a house. Together. Hmmm. And to help in what way? Great chapter!

Author's Response: ;) Thank you! We'll see how it goes!!

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

omg! when does she turn 18??!! great confrontation with dru!

Author's Response: Hmm... good question.. I will consider that. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Great chapter. Very hot and then angsty. I love angst and it will interesting how the rest of night will go.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I wasn't sure about this one, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!! The rest of the night should be very interesting ;)

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

I thought you were going to stop them when the person was at the door! Thank you for not doing so. :) I liked the sexual frenzy they were in.

Your Dru's crazy voice was perfect, very hilarious.

I can't wait to see what their night is like; I hope they do, do stuff. ;)

Looking forward to next chapter!!

Author's Response: Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed the teacher at the door. My original plan was actually to stop them but it just felt like the right time to get things moving along. I'm also happy Dru's crazy voice made sense to people :) Next chapter should be a lot less angsty and more fun and maybe they will do stuff.... ;) we'll see! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Whoa baby!!!

Please please please more

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I will post as soon as I can!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2012 - 05:32 am Title: Chapter 7: Rocking the Boat

Wow. Now he's clearly in too deep with Buffy, mostly after she comes to him. But, the story with Dru, and her rambling. Super spooky, and quite well done. I do not know how he will get out of this. I do have one question, though, in the last chapter, Buffy said that she was sixteen. In this chapter, Spike said he married when he was 21, three years from her... which would make her 18. So is she 16, or 18? One makes things a touch more complicated, so would probly be good to pick one. :) Really entranced, especially now that all hell has broken loose, and her burns for Buffy. (Still hung up on that imagery!) Please, Update soon!

Author's Response: The age thing is totally my mess up, thank you for catching it! Buffy is seventeen in the story. I fixed the two remarks about her age. As for the spookiness, I was in an odd mood I guess, but I'm glad you liked the imagery! Thank you for posting!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't really sure about this chapter, so it's good to know :) I'll post soon.

Reviewer: Spuffy0145 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2012 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

I am loving this story! Please add more soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will update very soon, I promise.

Reviewer: HOTTIESPIKE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2012 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

OMG!!! How can you do that to me and us for that matter? You have to update straightaway... it was getting sexy and you stopped it, tease much hehe. UPDATE. Thanks :)

Author's Response: Haha I am evil ;) But I hope to update by tomorrow the latest, so don't worry! I will give you a lovely chapter!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2012 - 05:39 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

Boy fills her up with pretty words and already she's panting and needy. Really hoped she'd play him just a bit more... But it is impossible to turn down soulful, lusty William. Hope they don't get caught... Update soon!

Author's Response: She still may be playing him ;) we'll just have to see! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope to update by tomorrow

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

They better not be inturrupted when they get going.

Excellent update! Please update soon :D

He'll soon find out that Buffy is his for way more than a moment; that girl is gonna be hooked on Mr. Giles!

Author's Response: Lol, I guess we will see. After all they did leave the door open. I will update as soon as I can!! And who could stand NOT being Spike's girl? I mean, honestly

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

So pleased to read a new chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to see it either :)

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

I love this story. My new fave WIP.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's so sweet :) I will post as soon as I can!

Reviewer: girlie_mel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

Oh wow! You're turning up the heat. I love it!
Great job on this chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Next chapter should be very interesting.

Reviewer: riz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter 6: You Kissed Me

Oh I get it! You're TRYING to make me crazy...! Great build up!

Author's Response: Lol, not trying but it always helps with the suspense. Thanks for the review!!

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