The intro to Dawn was nice. They don't seem to get along so I would like to read more about that. Buffy's father must have passed instead of her mother.

Author's Response: You would be correct, I mentioned briefly that her father passed in Chapter 5 at the very beginning, when Spikes asking her about her mom. I will get into that a little more as there bond gets stronger. As far as Dawn, for once I don't want her to be the annoying kid sister. I have a lot of great plans for dawn in my story! (: Thanks for your review! Cant wait to see how you like whats coming next!