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Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter 10

I love the vampire teenage tantrum so Dawn like. But to the question can they just flirt without being misunderstood I have my doubts.

Author's Response: Hee! We'll see, I guess. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2012 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 10

“Okay, like normal people with superpowers, short tempers and violent streaks.”

Learning how to be them again, or more like a new kind of them. Love mixed signals when they actually bother to work it out. BTW... Say You Will has only been around since 2003. In the scheme of Fleetwood Mac and Stevie Nicks, I'm not quite sure that that qualifies as "older than dirt." Granted, I don't think either one of them follows Stevie quite the way I do, Spike should know better. :) Love how you're using the song, though. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: oh thanks! I'll have to change that part. That's too important to screw up. I should have noticed that. I did look up the song to be sure who wrote it, but I never noticed the date and just assumed it had been around a long time. You're right, Spike probably would know better - and so would Buffy, actually if she thought about it. It'll be an easy fix. :)

Reviewer: AMI Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2012 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter 10

Aww poor sad Amy..I like that Spuffy made sure she was ok and got home :)

AACK! Spike and Buffy are so frustrating, but at least there was talking. Tiny steps...
Yay for flirty, maybe there will be kissy and then shaggy..lol

Great chap.)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like the next one... they're getting there. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2012 - 09:13 am Title: Chapter 10

This first part felt so sad. Poor Amy. Now Buffy and Spike are talking but it looks like they need to do that a lot more.

Author's Response: There are still things to work out...

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