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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2012 - 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

I abolutely adored this. Love fully flawed Buffy and Spike trying to work out how to handle the other. Nice to see them being more mature and tackling their issues with words, and right away rather than playing (too many) more games. The banter was great; Faith's dialogue was especially good.

A couple of minor errors; for example, you have Spike mentioning "Kalistos" in an early chapter but I think you meant Kakistos, and in this chapter he refers to a "Fyral" demon but that should be Fyarl. Oh, and this page has a "next" link, but it leads to a "you do not have permission to access" message.

I'll be adding this to favorites, I forsee reading it many times!

Author's Response: Oops! Sorry! This is what happens when my betas leave me on my own with my stupid fingers. Don't know what to tell you about the "next" link, but I'll see if it's just a chapter misnumbered or something. Might be something unfixable until Pari is recovered and back on the site.

Reviewer: LIZ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2012 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

Super sweet ending. I enjoyed your version of a reunited Spuffy. It's hard to find stories that get them together and be sweet towards each other while still staying true to the characters. You did a great job with this story. Can't wait for the sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad it worked for you and you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2012 - 08:19 am Title: Chapter 14

And it ends nicely, as it should. It's nice that they are so couply together. So it's Iceland in the sequel then. A big monster then. I wonder if he has a mother :-)

Author's Response: It's entirely possible that he has a mother.... LOL Thanks for reading and commenting

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2012 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 14

Aww great ending, I'm sad it's over ..it made my spuffy heart happy. :)

Loved Spike jumping onto the plane and the "honeymoon" talk. :)

Can't wait to read the sequel...Icelandic adventures should be cool and some honeymoon time too.

Thank you for sharing and keeping Spuffy alive.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2012 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter 14

Awww... fake next chapter after it was all over. Like them riding off into the sunset to fight mystery demons in ice land. Does Spike maybe fancy himself slaying a yeti? Would love to find out what happens next, though the two of them as a two being fully established is the main point of all stories after all. :) Well worth it. Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: LOL - sorry, need to set up for the sequel. I lose track of where I have and haven't indicated how many chapters the story will have. Guess this was one of those places where I didn't say "one more chapter after this". :) Thanks for reading!

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