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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2012 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 5

Ahhh... William. Yum. May not be exhibitionists yet, but I see much potential. And much to learn for both of them. Such fantastic lead in. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!

Author's Response: Nope, not peeping Toms quiet yet, but it's still earlier! I'm so glad you are enjoying, more Wednesday!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2012 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter 4

Cheers!

Author's Response: Glad you like, BR! ;)

Reviewer: rene Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2012 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

LOVE IT! Please keep updating! I'm really excited to see where this story goes

Author's Response: TY, rene! Welcome to my little corner of the world. Have a seat, sit back and relax, cause the fun has just started! More on Wednesday

Reviewer: Abigale Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, BBE. I'm writing this review on behalf of my kitten that is always perched on my shoulder when I'm reading your story. She usually starts purring, so I'm guessing that she is a very smart cat, that can not only read, but she knows very talented writing when she sees it.

*meow*

-sallyntmare- :-)

Author's Response: Awww, so sweet! She is a very smart kitty, especially choosing an owner like you! Abigale, tell your mommy to give you a nice bowl of warm milk for me.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'm back to continue my review. I love your Spike characterization, so much that I added it to the nomination list. He is already the confident Spike with the infamous swagger that I love. Perfect. The Spuffy meeting for the first time and the dialogue was done so well. xx

Author's Response: Welcome back!! I'm so flattered, even after such a short chapter and minimal dialog, you are loving my Spike(William) Thanks again for your nomination, you are far too kind!!*big huggers*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2012 - 05:50 am Title: Chapter 5

I'm still here. :)

Yay we finally meet Spike. And the attraction is definitely there on Buffy's part. Dreaming of him so soon huh? Not that I blame her.

Buffy is creeped out by Sebastian it seems but is drawn to the voyeurism watching him and Quinn.

Can't wait for more of Spike and his back story and Buffy's loss of control.

Enjoying. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, AMI!! Big time attraction here and it will only grow! Yeah, Sebastian is kinda creepy/sleezy. More will be coming next Wednesday.

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

I happy to see Spike. Now I I can't wait to find out more about him.

Author's Response: I knew you were waiting, Jaime. I hope his intro was good for you! Now he's here, you'll see much, much more of him!!!!

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hey, there. I'm enjoying this, thanks! Please keep posting. :)

Author's Response: Thanks IT. In spite of how strongly I feel about my writing, I still have that small part of me that is very insecure about it and the lack of/minimal reviews. I know I shouldn't let it get to me, but it still does. Thank you for letting me know you're still here

Reviewer: sallyntmare Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2012 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 5

well, that answers my question of if the last guy was Spike. The man in this chapter is most definetly Spike!!

and what readers would not still be with you? how can you start reading a bbe story and just stop? its blasphemy. my phone is dying so ill review more later.

Author's Response: *blushing* Yuppers, she has NOW met Spike (William) Things will be getting interesting from here on out. As for blasphemy, don't rightly know. Either way, I always know my sallyntmare always puts a smile on my face! :)

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2012 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay! So excited we get 2 updates this week. :)

OMG you tease! I thought for sure that was Spike. Blue eyes, bitey, sexy. And then he says his name is Sebastian lol Well I was glad cause he really seems to be into Quinn and I don't want Buffy/Quinn competition.

Buffy is now realizing the allure and darkness in this world and how it may tempt and seduce her too. Can't wait for Spike.

Great writing...I feel like I'm watching a movie or tv show. C'mon Wednesday get here fast. :)



Author's Response: *insert evil laugh here* I can't give everything away, AMI! I'm so flattered it feels you are watching a movie or tv show. Thanks so much for following my story. ;)

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2012 - 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for the early post, and yay, another post on Wednesday!! The chapters just get better and better. I'm still watching a movie when I read.

Two questions: when the man bit into the woman's neck- it was with blunt teeth, right? I figured because Buffy didn't freak out...

Also: was that not Spike? Or was Sabastian his cover name?

Can't wait for two more days!!! Actually, one and half now :-)

Author's Response: I didn't answer this untl I posted Chapter 5. I wanted the chapter to speak for itself. One question that isn't answered, yes, they are blunt teeth.

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2012 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey, honey. I love that this is post early. Im a bit intoxicated.LOL. ill read this tomorrow. Xx

Author's Response: Have a drink for me! LOL!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2012 - 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter setting things up. When will Spike enter the picture though. I'm really curious about him.

Author's Response: TY, Jaime. I promise, Spike will be here real soon!!! Hopefully you can wait!!!!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2012 - 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: TY, photographynut! I'm glad you are enjoying. New chappie next Wednesday.

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2012 - 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 3

Just wanted to let you know I've been reading your story, it's just that I'm really bad at reviewing lately :(

Loving it so far, I love all the back story on Elizabeth, and now she's "transformed" into Buffy.

Can't wait for her and Spike to meet, and all the supernatural stuff and all these warnings to come into effect. I'M IN!!

Impatiently waiting until next Wednesday. ;)

Author's Response: Welcome, Ami!!! I'll hold off beating you with a wet noodle...for now! LOL!!! I'm so glad you are enjoying my story so far. Now comes the juicy stuff. Warnings galore!!!

Reviewer: kelticmoon Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2012 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

can hardly wait for more, please. quickly

Author's Response: Welcome, kelticmoon! Save any problems, I will be updating regularly on every Wednesday. Please stop by next week and left me know what you think!

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2012 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

I liked the Pretty Woman plug :-) I was thinking of that as a was reading so I thought it was cute that it was mentioned. So looking forward to next Wednesday already. My patience shall have to stay intact. :-D

Although, I'm already jonzin' for my Fallen fix. Heh.

Author's Response: You make me smile!!!! Big huggers!!!

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2012 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Share me thoughts, you say? Where shall I begin?!

Your writing is so descriptive it feels like I'm not even reading it. I get so into the visual that I feel like I'm watching a movie or even in the story with Elizabeth.

I loved her transformation into Buffy. Blonde is definetly her color.

I can't wait for an encounter with her and Spike.

Have I mentioned that the supernatural warning has got me so freakin' excited?! ;-)

An awesome update as always, bbe!

Thank you so much for the early treat.

And Christmas island? Sounds like a blast.

Author's Response: I'm so flattered, sallyntmare. Sometimes I wonder and worry that I'm too descriptive and that it takes away from the story. I'm glad that for you it doesn't. I'm glad you're excited about the supernatural piece, I promise it will start making it's presence know real soon!!! Never been to Christmas Island, all I think of with the name is Rudolph the Red Nose and the land of misfit toys!!!

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2012 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter 3

Ah! Thanku so much :-) I got the email notification as i was walking into work. I literally squeeled so now they think im a bigger wierdo LOL. I cant wait to finish my day so I can read!!! :-)

Author's Response: No, thank you, sweetie! I look forward to what you think! :)

Reviewer: Sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2012 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Two days has never felt so far away. Hope the writing is going good and I'm really looking forward to your update!

Author's Response: HeHe! I'll try not let you suffer too long!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2012 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aww poor Buffy.

I love Joyce and Dawn. It's So sad what happened to them. Good chapter telling the back story. I can't wait to see Spike.

Author's Response: Welcome, Jaime! Yes, Buffy's past is riddled with difficulties. Don't worry, he'll make his appearance soon!

Reviewer: Photographynut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2012 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Buffy has lost a lot in her life.

Author's Response: Yes she has, but she is using this for something positive. Thanks for following this story, more will be up Wednesday

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2012 - 02:02 am Title: Chapter 1

I just noticed the note: this story based in the supernatural.......yay! I thought this story was all human and loved it but now this changes everything. Im a chipper lady right now.

Oh wednesday, why are u so far away?

Author's Response: I initially didn't have that little detail, but I felt that "NC-17" is wayyyy too broad to really capture what type of story this is. I guess if I had to put under a genre category, it's a supernatural thriller. Thanks so much for your support and kind words! *big huggers*

Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2012 - 01:57 am Title: Chapter 2

Happy Wednesday! :-) I cant get over how detailed and wonderful your writing is. This story is already so much more than I ever imagined. I am hooked on this story. Im an offical Fallen junkie. Hopefully I wont have to ever miss a fix, right? heh :-)

Poor Dawn, Im glad you added that, though. Buffy really needed her own tragedy to be passionate about her job.

Cant wait for next week.

Author's Response: You know how to make me smile, sallyntmare! When I'm having a brain-freeze, I remember how I have to give you a fix and I power through!!! Yes, the part about Joyce and Dawn were so sad, but important. What hits us personally affects us the most. See you next week!!

Reviewer: Guset Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2012 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 2

I am absolutely smitten with this story...I love that Buffy is a tough cop and just can't wait to read the next chapter, PLEASE don't make me wait too long:)

Author's Response: *blushing* Welcome, Guset, to my little corner of the world! Your words are so kind. Nope, no waiting. Well, not too long. Barring any issues, I will be updating weekly, every Wednesday.

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