Date: 05/05/2013 - 08:09 am Title: Chapter 4: Fictional Interests?
I like it a lot! Just a couple things. In one place you mention it's 10 pm and then you say it's 9pm. Also the boo radley reference from gg is actually originally from to kill a mockingbird ;)
Author's Response: Ugh i messed up the time thing? Sorry about that. But the Boo Radley thing i actually know is from To Kill a Mockingbird (i've read it twice) I just referenced GG because i happened to think of that scene from that tv show when i wrote it :3 Thanks for reading and the review!
Date: 10/11/2012 - 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: Fictional Interests?
Enjoying the story.. and Grams.. of course..
Date: 09/29/2012 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter 4: Fictional Interests?
I hope you update quickly. This is so good. I wish I were a better writer so that I could adequately describe how much I like your writing. But I guess that's why you are the writer and I am merely the reader. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: oh my gosh you're too kind! I will try to update quicker on this story than i have on my other one! *hugs*