Date: 11/03/2012 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I liked this chapter, however brief, because it showed the relationship between him and Anya, I like it when they're friends in a story. Good job.
The spacing is off for this chapter. check it out.
Author's Response: Thanks. I likethe Anya Spike friendship too I'm trying to figure out this spacing thing but I can't wrap my head around it.
Date: 10/30/2012 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really like your story so far. The idea is great and the writing style got a lot better after the first chapter.
At first I thought that a little bit more insight into the characters would be great, but after the last two chapters I really feel like you are going there.
So far I like all of the characters and think I will very much enjoy finding out all the reasons that got them where they are now.
Please keep posting.