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Reviewer: sallyntmare Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2013 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter 18

Loved how supportive Anya was. Especially loved the scene where buffy called spike to come to bed! Story is moving along so nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like Anya. She's trying to be a better friend.

Reviewer: emokitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 18

i lovvvvveeeee this story. i hope that Spike ... William doesn't lose Buffy. i would cry. i love buffy !! loved this chapter, keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Yayy!!!! So good to hear. My muse is jumping up and down for joy. You'll just have to keep reading to find out what happens to Buffy ;)

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 18

I am sorry I have not reviewed. I am enjoying your story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. It's nice to know you're reading and I'm glad to hear you like it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm somewhat happier with Anya but I think since Xander can see how sick Buffy is he should be considerate enough to say they need to be staying in a hotel. He knows they are unwanted house guests yet they still barged in and now they are talking about having a celebration?! Go home and celebrate you future, don't stay and do so in front of someone that may not have a future of her own. I can’t believe Will thinks going out to celebrate the next night is a good idea, regardless of him planning on just drinking water. I know Xander and Anya haven’t been told she has breast cancer but they have noticed how ill she is and they can see she no longer has any hair – that should tell them what’s wrong. And even if they knew for sure she was cured she's still not feeling well enough for them to be there. Will may not be able to make them leave town but couldn’t he at least kick them out of the house?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know what you think. Reviews like yours help me a lot in the writing process. Yes Xander is being incredibly selfish. He's very hurt about the way Buffy has treated their friendship and isn't thinking about the reasons for her behavior. This is something that will be addressed soon. William thinks Buffy can benefit from a night out. I think I should have made that point a little clearer. As for the hotel thing..... Well that would make things way too simple wouldn't it? ;) I'm glad I could make Anya a little more tolerable. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: jen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2013 - 04:57 am Title: Chapter 18

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