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Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2013 - 08:01 pm Title: Fade to Black

Did Lydia always look like she has a stake up her bum? I love how the Bot referred to Spike as the Evil Dead! I am still reeling over what may have happened to Spike and I can’t bear to think about what is apparently about to happen to Buffy. I definitely need to prepare myself for the next few chapters, don’t I? Would a day or two of prayer and meditation help? Thanks for another intense chapter.

Author's Response: Hey Melly! I guess Lydia did! LOL! I only found a couple of good screencaps for her (as in clear ones) and she looked that way in both! Oh no! What's happened to Spike??! And oh no, Buffy! argh! Yes, you will need to prepare for the next few chapters. The angst will build to a beautiful, breathtaking, heartbreaking crescendo before things settle down again. Keep the kleenex near! I don't think prayer will do it ... sorry! {hugs} Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! I love hearing from you, girl!!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/11/2013 - 01:46 am Title: Dazed and Confused

As much as I love talking to you Passion4Spike and more importantly reading your stories this is actually going to be a shout out to lunna798 I noticed your post and I just have to ask which bar did you meet Passion's muse because I want to have a talk to that evil bastard.

Author's Response: ROFL ... I'd like to know too so I can keep him outta there!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2013 - 07:43 pm Title: Dazed and Confused

Another Sad But Great Chapter

Author's Response: Hi, dev! The sadness will continue for a bit - hang in there! Thanks for reading and stopping in here! It really does mean a lot to hear from you.

Reviewer: lunna798 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2013 - 04:31 pm Title: Dazed and Confused

I am so afraid that Spike will end up turning to the Bot even for just comofort (not sex) and Buffy will take that as further evidence that he can't touch her because she is "dirty". I am afraid she is going to run and if Spike is still in this frame of mind he might just let her go.

Author's Response: Oh my, lunna! Have you been buying beers for my evil, yet devilishly handsome, muse? You seem to have loosened his sexy tongue! We'll see how your prediction plays out over the next about 3 chapters ... I'm really gonna have to chain that little scamp up and keep him out of the virtual bars... :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2013 - 06:24 am Title: Dazed and Confused

Long way to go, but at least they are back to Spike and Buffy again. Most important thing. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hey BR! Yes, back to the same mis-communicating couple with a little extra helping of paranoia and guilt added to the mix. It's gonna be a sad road back to themselves. Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in. Love hearing from you - it means a lot!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/2013 - 06:06 am Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Can only hope that Barmy Buffy kept the real girl safe throughout... Hope Spike can bring her back.

Author's Response: Hey BR! Yes, we can hope that by retreating mentally she's been at least partly protected, but you know Buffy, even when she's 'all there' her mind works in mysterious ways. Hopefully Spike can unravel the tangled web ... Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, BR!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2013 - 11:49 pm Title: Dazed and Confused

I'm glad she at least came out of it to eat and rethink the whole Spike is dead. I just hope Spike doesn't continue to hold back his comforting touch and make her think he can't stand to touch her now. Misunderstandings seem to be their motto.

Author's Response: Funny you should say that, Blue Eyes, I do believe the next chapter's theme song is 'Misunderstood'. :O They do both seem to have a problem with honest and open communication. Not until their backs are against the wall will they reveal the honest truth to each other. That wall will be hit about 3 chapters from now ... In the meantime, keep the tissues handy. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, Blue Eyes! Always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: All4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2013 - 10:25 pm Title: Dazed and Confused

And the angst is not reduced, merely redefined. This is going to be a long haul - and is the Council still looking for Buffy? And why did they want her in the first place? Can't wait.....

Author's Response: Hey All4Spike, The angst will not be reduced for a few chapters, it will get worse before it gets better. The Council may well still be looking for Buffy - someone has reported her as being unstable and they want to contain her, the establishment higher-ups probably feel they could help her. They don't have any other truly 'active Slayer' so they need her or they won't have anything to do but twiddle each other. (according to what Spike says later). Will have more soon! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2013 - 07:01 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Next chapter please!!!!

Author's Response: Soon!!! it will be up Friday night or Saturday at the latest. Thanks!!

Reviewer: tina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2013 - 04:39 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Poor Buffy! I really wish you had hurt Weatherby more. What a sleazebag! Loved the bot acting as Buffy. She really is a great character.

Author's Response: Hi Tina! Most people think Spike should've done more to Weatherby, but my muse has been known to go overboard with the gore, so when my beta reader was utterly squicked by what I first had Spike do (rip all Weatherby's danglies OFF), I scaled it back. Spike will come back to him, however - don't worry. Glad you like the Bot, she's been a wonderful addition to the story. I worried about bringing her along at first, but she's kept it from being a true angst-fest. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here! Love hearing from you, hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: Lilly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2013 - 12:59 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

This fic is so sad xx but I love it xx Feel so sorry for Spike. I couldn't even imagine how hard it is for him. And hasn't Buffy gone through enough x please don't bring Riley into this lol xx it would literally break Spike lol xx please continue this. Can't wait to see what happens next. Truley heart breaking and moving.. Thanks xx Lilly xx

Author's Response: Hi, LIlly! Thank you so much for your kind words. I know, I feel so badly for both of them and it's only gonna get worse for a while now as Spike tries to find a way to help Buffy and Buffy tries to deal with her own issues in the aftermath. My muse certainly loves to make me cry, and I, therefore, must share it with you. :)

Riley ... hmmm ... Riley may show up at some point, actually. No spoilers. Sorry. :) Will have more Friday night or Saturday at the latest. I try to update a couple of times a week. I won't leave you hanging, I promise. :) Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you, hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 - 08:30 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

First the convo between BB and the cop was hilarious, and then between her and Sucker. LOL. Thank god the Bot is in this story cause the angst can be overwhelming and she makes things a little better.
Loved Spike with that skank Lydia, I love when he goes all William the Bloody on people. :)

Good scene at the Watcher's HQ with the guards and the escape too. BB really channelled our Buffy. :)

OMG poor Buffy I hate to think what that bastard did to her. and I have a feeling that even Spike won't be able to get her back for a long while.
I hate when Spike doubts himself like this, and thinks he's no good for Buffy and that she's better off with Capt. Broodypire. NO, NO, NO! Angel sucks and he probably called the Council, or maybe Giles did. We will find out right? Whoever did deserves to suffer and feel guilty forever! Wanker!

BTW I loved what the Bot did to Weatherby. I wasn't squicked at all. I thought he got off lightly. What was the original plan that PB thought was too squicky? I hope when Spike catches up to him later that he implementsi it and MORE. *evil laff*

great writing babes. *smooch*

Author's Response: Hey AMI!!
It's funny in the last review you thought Weatherby should have his balls ripped off, cos that's what I had Spike tell the Bot do in my first version. (and she did, very well!) That's what PB thought it was too gory and squicky. Of course *that* I described in all it's beautiful, bloody, gruesome detail. So, I scaled it back, but Spike will return to exact more vengeance on him later.

Oh, I love Spike as all evil and William the Bloody too! - of course, all done in the name of love. It'st just ... YUM. Glad you liked it. And the Bot - she really has saved this story from being a pure angst-fest. Glad you like her!

BB did a great job acting like Buffy with the guards at the Council. Credit to Spike's good prep-work. :)

We will find out who called the Council, but it will be a while. I'm pretty sure there will be some level of Karma-ish payback.

Spike's self-doubt will continue to rear it's ugly head for a couple of chapters as he struggles to find a way to help Buffy. He's got such a soft heart inside, poor Spikey.

Thanks again for reading and sticking with me through the angst. There will be more - hang in, AMI, it will be worth it, I think. :) {{hugs}}

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 - 07:39 pm Title: Fade to Black

Oh God...poor Buffy, and just when she was getting better too. Thank goodness, you didn't go into details, that I couldn't deal with. I know Spike isn't dust... even you aren't that cruel. Hopefully the bot can rescue Buffy, and go all medieval on Weatherley's ass, he deserves to have his balls ripped out. Disgusting Bastard.

And now I'm really worried about what will happen when Spike finds out she's pregnant. He doesn't know about the Dawn mission so he's gonna think that sick fu*k is the dad. :( Oh man.

Not gonna say I love it...cause it's too painful, but very well written as per. :) *hugs*

Author's Response: Hey, AMI! One day I'm gonna dust Spike for real and just shock the heck outta everybody! I think I've become too predictable! :P

I agree that's what Weatherby deserves - totally! And what will happen when Spike finds out about the baby!? Oh dear ... that could be not of the good.

Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in, AMI! The angst will deepen for a while, but I promise happiness later. Hang in! {hugs}

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 - 12:42 pm Title: Broken Promises

The scene between Buffy and the Bot may be the best yet! It’s amazing how Buffy’s mind works (or not) isn’t it? I knew from the title to be very afraid when I read this chapter and man was I right!! Thanks for another exciting chapter and your well wishes.

Author's Response: Hey, Melly! Yeah, I didn't want anyone thinking this was gonna end well, just 'cos it started off funny. :) No false hope! Buffy's mind is truly a scary place! Put on your big-girl panties now - the angst is really fixin' to kick in. Take care of those digits. See you soon! (My muse is building a barricade so you can't toss hard objects at him). {hugs}

Reviewer: Nana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 - 06:07 am Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

This is a great story. Thank you for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it. I hope it continues to entertain! Lots more to come!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2013 - 01:57 am Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Damn girl your good. That song at the end was such a perfect accompament to this chapter. Now the question of how to explain Buffy's pregnancy has been answered although of course in error. The new question is will Buffy be able to come out of this new comatose like state. Thank you for at least making sure Mr. Slime got at least his balls smashed but I so look forward to his death for the man needs to die. Buffybot was awesome; she literally saved the day. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Hey, Blue Eyes! Well, Spike knows about the pregnancy now, sort of. He'll, of course, know for sure soon, then what?

The good news is that Buffy will be able to recover from the comatose state, the bad news is ... Well, you'll have to wait and see.

And Mr. Slime ... don't worry, Spike has not forgotten him! Spike will be back for more. Glad you like the Bot - she did an awesome job, didn't she? Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, Blue Eyes! Love hearing from you!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 10:54 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Loved Bot Revenge On Weatherby

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! There will be more later. I originally had her do something worse and my beta reader thought it was too much, so I scaled it back. My muse can get pretty gruesome at times. Spike'll seek more vengeance on the wanker later. Thanks for letting me know!

Reviewer: dev Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 10:48 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Sad but great chapter..Will spike be able to get through to buffy win she so past broken.Love Bot

Author's Response: You know Spike's gonna give it his all. We'll find out how he does over the next couple of chapters. It'll be a hard road for them to walk. Glad you liked the Bot! She's fun. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, dev!!

Reviewer: Crazylife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 10:24 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Wow! Just caught up, loved what happened to Weatherby btw. Poor Buffy, poor Spike. Again the writing was amazing. Eager to see how Spike brings her back.

Author's Response: Hi Crazylife! I'm glad you liked what happened to Weatherby. Me thinks Spike is not done with him yet. Thank you so much for reading and stopping in here! It means a lot!

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 09:58 pm Title: Broken Promises

HI! sorry again, I've been having tooth issues and the antibiotics made me feel crappy so I haven't even been reading,
now I'm better so I'm back. :)

Loved the beginning...Buffy giving lessons to the Bot was so cute. Loved the Bot turning the tables on Buffy about Spike's tongue leer. lol And the penis line was priceless.

OMG Buffy is so frustrating..what goes on in her mind, seriously? First she's leaving, then she;s mad at Spike cause she thinks he's lying to her. Meanwhile she's been lying all this time.

OK WTF? Who is this skank? She has to be either sent by Angel or someone from the WC. Oh Damn...the angst will be starting in 10,9,8,7,6,5.....

Onto the next...*bites nails*.

Author's Response: Hey AMI! Oh, teeth issues suck! Sorry that you're feeling crummy! Hope it's better soon.

Glad you liked the Buffy : Bot lessons! And the Bot turning the tables was fun!

Buffy is frustrating! I watched S6 again recently and it was all 'come here - go away - get over me - don't get over me so fast' . I mean, geez, woman! I think that, if this hadn't happened, Buffy probably would've not left him. She keeps putting it off, and putting it off ... I think she would've just put it off so long that he would've known and she would've had to have come clean. But yeah, double-standards seem to be her thing.

Yep, here comes the angst ... 4,3,2,1,.... ARGH!

Thanks so much for reading and stopping in here, AMI! I promise there will be a reward after the angst. {hugs}

Reviewer: u2fan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 03:56 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Oh you and your angst...so depressing that you want to turn away but for some reason you can't. I'm such a rubbernecker.

I feel Spike needs to take a magical mystery tour in Buffy's brain to get her back this time. That hasn't been done at all in this universe. Maybe he can find her that way..and her secrets. Getting the Scoobies involved now would cause them to never let her see him again...he needs to get her back to a sane state before he gives her an option to leave (which she so won't).

Author's Response: Oh, I know! I'm sorry! Oh, who am I kidding? I'm not sorry at all! :P It is kinda like a train wreck, you don't want to look, but you can't help it. Some people read between their fingers, or so they tell me.

Oh, Spike in Buffy's brain would be scary, wouldn't it? heehee! That's a good solution, though - however not one that's gonna happen. She's gonna have to open up to him; actually, they're both gonna have to come clean on stuff before the angst can be resolved. And yes, she will have to get back to a fully sane state before she can decide to leave, so we'll see how that goes.

Hang on through the angst and rewarded you shall be, Padawan. Thanks so much for reading and stopping in, even if it is to just yell at my evil muse. See ya again soon!

Reviewer: Melly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2013 - 03:08 pm Title: Scream

I’m having trouble typing with injured fingers (thinking of the stupidity that caused the injury is the most painful) so this will be a short review. This was a very, very hot chapter; my husband would love it but if I let him read it I’m sure I’ll have to fight him for computer time in the future!! Once again great dialogue with the Bot! Thanks for another great chapter to a wonderful story.

Author's Response: Oh no! Injured fingers suck! Even little paper cuts and stuff like that suck when you're trying to type. I hope they get better soon! Luckily, my husband has never shown much interest in my 'Spurfy', as he calls it, obsession. (he *hates* anything remotely sci-fi) I don't think he's ever read any of it. I may have to kill him if he tried to wheedle into my computer time! Glad this didn't squick you out - I know the threesome bit wasn't high on your list of things to do. Back to the angst next - get ready! Hope your fingers are better by then so you can scream at my handsome, though evil, muse. :) Thanks, Melly! Feel better!

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Date: 03/05/2013 - 02:33 pm Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Pulling the call box out of a hospital wall is one sure-fire way to garner attention. That sets off an emergency alarm and makes staff come running. Just saying....

Author's Response: Oh! See, I didn't know that! Thanks! Bad Spike! Let's just say he pulled it away from her reach then. Obviously, I've never pulled the call box out of the wall before or worked in a hospital. Thanks!

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Date: 03/05/2013 - 11:46 am Title: Bird With a Broken Wing

Poor Buffy! I'm glad they didn't kill Weatherby - yet. He deserves to suffer and for his actions to become known. Spike will have the bot to help him with Buffy - and he knows how to tend to damaged women after all his time with Dru. I have faith in him. Of course he is going to assume that the child is Weatherby's, unless Buffy finally explains about Dawn.

Author's Response: Hey, All4Spike! Oh yeah, Buffy's been knocked down again. Spike's gonna have a harder go of it this time trying to get through to her, but certainly he won't give up. And the pregnancy will add another layer of frustration and angst to the mix, as well. His ability to deal with damaged women will be tested, as will his patience and his status as 'Love's Bitch'. And you are right, he's not gonna assume the baby is *his* since that would be ridiculous, so that will bring in even more emotional turmoil. Let the angst begin. Thanks so much for reading and always stopping in, A4S! Always love hearing from you! More soon!

Reviewer: Blue Eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 - 02:52 pm Title: Fade to Black

This is bad--duh. I can't imagine Buffy being raped she has to snap out of it at some point or the other self comes to her defense. I can see Spike and Buffybot saving the day but then with her pregnancy I bet Spike thinks Mr. Wetworks is the father. God you are so good at this twist making business again didn't see it coming. But this is way better than her running away.

Author's Response: Hey Blue Eyes! Eeeek!! Yes, very bad! Oh dear, oh dear! The father of the baby will become a point of contention later, you are spot on with that! Yay for more angst! Oh ... umm .. I mean, drat, more angst! Thanks so much for reading and stopping in! Love hearing from you! Will have more soon and we'll find out just what happened to Spike.

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