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Reviewer: xXEMProductionsXx Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2013 - 10:22 am Title: Will You Marry Me?

Lovely read currently hooked on it. The only thing I would say is that I found myself getting a little lost because it wasn't well spaced out, you could do with going back over it and using the < br > symbol to separate it out a little bit :) x other than I loved it, I hope they properly fall for each other :) please continue I love it :) Much Love Lilly xxx

Reviewer: Angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2013 - 08:05 pm Title: Will You Marry Me?

Great read, please more, I´m hooked!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2013 - 01:09 pm Title: Will You Marry Me?

Im sure the story´s good but I can barely read it! You need space in your text! It´s too much text, please put som air in too it!!

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