Reviews For An Unwilling Hero
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Reviewer: AgentKalGibbs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2015 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Many lols. :)



Author's Response: yay!

Reviewer: Sigyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2015 - 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Don't know about the thank you at the end of section two. On the whole, the exchange seemed more fond than I remember from cannon. Inner thoughts and feelings aren't nessessarily the things we say and do, and I think you could have made it more subtle and still gotten the message across. But on the whole, a good story -- it does clear up why they kept Spike as long as they did, and made some wonderful jokes about the "spell" they were under. Well done.



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed most of it. Don't know if I explained in summary or not, but it was someone else's comments about those two moments after the spell that sparked the bunny. I did look at the dvd before writing it to see if it would work, and sure enough, the smack was half-hearted and she touched him on the shoulder. It's not much, but enough to build a story on. :)

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2014 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter 4

Very sweet, but definitely feels unfinished.

Author's Response: I think you'll find that many/most of my fics, - especially those set in early seasons where to continue means to rewrite the season - end when I have Buffy and Spike in what seems like a good, or hopeful, place. Sometimes a plot bunny will pop up later and there will be a follow-up fic set in whatever AU situation the first story has created, but not often or always. Usually I will leave them when they are either in a relationship, or obviously in a good place from which a relationship could develop. The focus is more on whatever twist of canon events (or purely made-up events) might conceivably make a relationship possible than it is on exploring how that relationship might change the rest of the season. I hope that works for you on these shorter fics that don't seem finished. They aren't meant to be endings, but beginnings. :)

Reviewer: nmcil Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2014 - 08:18 am Title: Chapter 4

Love It -

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2013 - 06:42 am Title: Chapter 4

Awesome story, I loved it. Is there going to be more?

Dani

Author's Response: Thanks. There could be more, obviously, but I'm working on another one from that era right now. But someday....

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2013 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

As always with your stories, really good.

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: magnus374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2013 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice interaction.

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

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